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Politix 
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Registration Date: 24-05-2005
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Please check out my new track 'Casualty' and post your comments here!!!
This was made on fl studio 5 (as always)
i also used soundforge 4.5 and a bunch of plugins...
please take a listen and tell me what you think
thanks
Politix
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11-06-2005 14:31 |
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broadside
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Registration Date: 17-01-2005
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ok listening . . .
like the minor chord proggression, nice melodies for a change. maybe a tad cheesy in some respects id just twitch it to make it a little bit more moody. and the sounds arent the best, but that can all be easily altered.
beat is preety bad though 
its well quick, maybe to quiet, to simple, and the sounds are wrong.
again really nice idea at 1:36 but too loud.
and the bass underneath the drop - which is ok - sounds like the kind of bass you might get on the polyphonic ringtone version of this tune, but its way too pussy for the real thing 
i like the ideas though, and thats whats important. just need to put in a lot of work, like everyone, on production technques and work on complicating them beats. should be easy enough in fruity.
thats it really, thanks for the listem 
This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by broadside: 11-06-2005 17:40.
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11-06-2005 17:38 |
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Stutterstep
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Nice intro, cool leads,
what tempo is this song made in?????
Your mix is way off. U need to redo it. im not sure what kind of speakers you have but try a few different ones, headphones or bounce it to CD and listen to it on anything, TV, radio what ever
Your Melodeys and ideas r really good. just work on the mix.
Respect
Stutter
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11-06-2005 23:55 |
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teknyne
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ez! liking this one, all the melodies, basslines are cool but the instrument sounds themselves need changin i reckon, they sound like a ringtone. needs mixing again, drums are very quiet in places, and i reckon u could probably do with dropping the tempo a bit.
on the whole i like this track, just needs a good tweaking
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www.wonkee.co.uk
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12-06-2005 20:14 |
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baz
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Originally posted by Stutterstep
Your mix is way off. U need to redo it. im not sure what kind of speakers you have but try a few different ones, headphones or bounce it to CD and listen to it on anything, TV, radio what ever
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i totally agree on stutterstep ...you need other speakers cuz this is the second one you posted wich had the same problem ....an i'm pretty sure you followed advices since your previous tune
lookin' forward for a remake 
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"shotgun ; slammin in yo chestpiece ; blaw"
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