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S.O.T.A. S.O.T.A. is a male

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Please check out my new track 'spiral' and post your comments here!!!

here's something else

10-06-2005 01:54

D2o

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like the staby sound in the intro....
beat is pretty heavy...but maybee needs some tighter compression to tighten it.....
like the arpeggio creeping in.....haven't heard that sort of thing in a while.....
phasing on it is maybe too thick....
liking the wierd synth thing that comes in just before the drop and into the track......needs a bit of eq'ing though......sound a bit messy with the other stuff in the track......
but when it changes back to the bit with just the arp it sound nice and cleanly mixed.....
ooooooh..like the tripplety wobbles in the second break....nice

over all very good
different to what a lot of other people a making which is good!
just clean up that bit that come in on the drop and your on to a good'un... Bigup

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10-06-2005 10:45

D2o

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what does S.O.T.A stand for???

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10-06-2005 10:46

Greyone Greyone is a male

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heavy intro , drop is good but overal sound should be filterd ( to much sharp sounds)
snares are good-sounding but a bit overused ( it should be better if you change the velocity of the snares in the loop)
outro is missing. allso some buildups to improve the drops.
track has some good ideas but there should be worked on the structure and the equalising. 6/10

10-06-2005 12:52

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Originally posted by Dj Jimmy C
what does S.O.T.A stand for???

stinkin old trannies arse......maybe Big Grin

10-06-2005 15:30

PassDa J. PassDa J. is a male

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Very cool intro ( not really an intro but ... ), like the chaos ... nice sounds in it ... makes me flowting a bit Big Grin

It has a litlle trance-feeling to it ... nice kick in the second part, very good buildup, I love the second part after the brake WOW .. you're good dude respect your style, really ...

The song doesn't really have a jumpy feeling too it, just a LISTEN TO THIS feeling, know what I'm saying ... cool snare ... constant hihats make it lowd and noizy ... kinda my style ... not hard to place them eather Tongue

So as I said it's a listen song not a dance song ... 7.5/10 cool dude too bad the song just suddently stops, should have done a better outro ..

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10-06-2005 17:14

S.O.T.A. S.O.T.A. is a male

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Thank you all for commenting I appriciate it. I know it has no outro I was just kind of messing around with this one the other day. Didn't put much care into the end. It might have helped in peoples opinion. I can't say what S.O.T.A. means yet or everyone will laugh since it's an optimistic name my producing needs to be better. I was trying to make this one a little abrasive hence some rough sounds, plus I still need to master it as all the rest of my tracks.
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10-06-2005 17:24

Darkside Darkside is a male

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drums in the beginning are pretty good. love that apache.
synth line is fantastic too.
dunno about the trancy synths tho...but thats just not my style of dnb, so its not entirely an actual problem.
the bassline is kinda shifty, that last note of it at the end is real small and quiet, while the others are big and louder. but, i mean, the sound that you used for it is great.
the melodies sound great by themselves, but put together, something seems a little off.
song's structure is kinda different from others.
you've improved very much my friend!
sounds in this are excellent, sound quality is gettin better but still not quite the S.O.T.A. Big Grin

but give your tunes some more atmos man!
7/10

11-06-2005 03:08

S.O.T.A. S.O.T.A. is a male

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Yeah I know what you are saying about all together sounding a little off I couldn't figure it out completley it did get close though huh? It's all the malstrom part. something about it is maybe distracting? Oh well thanks for reviewing it I always like to hear what you have to say.
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11-06-2005 03:27

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20-06-2005 06:43

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