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Victom#1 
Producer
Registration Date: 26-05-2005
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Please check out my new track 'Hindsight' and post your comments here!!!
YAY Finally my producer rights! I finished this last week, It doesn't ever feel like it picks up as much as I was going for.
I used reason 2.5
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07-06-2005 02:07 |
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S.O.T.A.
SHADOW STAR
Registration Date: 13-05-2005
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whats up? Finally your track COOL! Begining is interesting sounds futuristic. I was expecting it to get really loud. It's cool chill like that though. You incorperate things well. Could use some sound effects like accent ones. I would sound good with a vocal over it.
HELL YEAH good first track I don't see anything wrong with this track production wise.
COOL
LATER
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07-06-2005 06:45 |
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anf0 D
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Registration Date: 31-03-2005
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intro is alright, abit long... the synths are nice. drums sound alright... but i think they would need abit more... choice of sounds for the drums are nice. they just dont feel fully full if u know what i mean.
mellodically its pretty cool. not my cuppa tea though.
keep up the good work
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08-06-2005 01:14 |
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Halph-Price
Zombie Algorithm
Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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you'r tracks empty enough as it is now, to start and flesh it out, try layering a bit of the drums, and tryning some nice atmospheric pads near the middle of the track, that really span around, if you get my meaning. lush?
also a nice solid snare to go along would be most benficial, you have a lite one beating around but, you need to get a snare that stamps down a bit. evne if just a subtle quick on on beat.
4:10 or so, it starts kicking, but you need sometihng at the .15khz - 3khz range to give it the bite. that's the crucial range that is most preceptive. vocals and lead instruments are here.
so you neglected that. anything orks there. piano or vocals, robot sounds, whatever.
good track, try to flesh it out, and make a few Variations at the end of the 4 loops of beats. evne just a little tihng helps keep intrest. bigger ones in middle, and at the end of the different sections of the song (i.e. drop, intro, ...ect). bigger as in more constrast, or more variation formt he original loop or rhythem.
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Halph-Price: 18-06-2005 06:36.
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18-06-2005 06:35 |
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Registration Date: 19-02-2005
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filter subs an turn up the snare an it'll be ok
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"shotgun ; slammin in yo chestpiece ; blaw"
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04-07-2005 23:12 |
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