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Greyone 
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Please check out my new track 'The Darkside' and post your comments here!!!
Again ...some hardstep
I'm still in my experimental fase , so i've checked that for some basses...(sample pack from Surya)
...thanx.
This track has been deleted on the producer's request
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06-06-2005 20:09 |
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CubicSphere
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Darkside
Cool, like the vocal sample when at the start. The bass sounds quite powerfull too, but then becomes way way too overpowering. I can hear the snares but not the fills at all.
NIce change after the drop at about 2.20. The tune builds pretty well, with some nicely used vocal samples.
I get the idea of what you're trying to do, but I think theres just too much distortion. The tune seems a bit too muddy.
Dude - make no apologies for hardstep!! Bring on the experimentation!
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06-06-2005 21:11 |
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S.O.T.A.
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what's up? when it starts out those are some dirty drums. Makes me think of some old school stuff. Your track sounds okay but something is up with the levels. I wish it weren't cause it sounds like something cool is going on. The bass is making almost everything imposible hear. Will you send me a better cut so I can review it better?
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06-06-2005 23:47 |
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anf0 D
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cool dark track... well the ideas are really cool, i think u just need to execute them abit better...
vocals samples are fukn gold with the dely....
the basslines are sweet... really nice n evol.
i like the filterd bass shot the climbs before the drop.
the intro was cool.
drums need a little bit of work...
overall eq'ing needs abit of work.
maybe some compression.
oh n i think u have a sub bass goin over another bass, n it doesnt sound right, to me. i think maybe u should cut it up n make it abit more tekky, but thats just me.
keep it up mate... got some nice evil ideas.... this has lots of potential
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08-06-2005 01:04 |
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Greyone
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thanx for reviewing this track , i got a lot of info from you guys and will make my next one better...
Ps: next one will be a goa-dnb track called : 'Mutation' ... 
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08-06-2005 12:22 |
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Soi
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Hmmm, track could be nice, i see what you're getting at, but overal sounding quality is pretty awkward... And i really haven't got a clue why...
Sounds like you distorted 80% of the samples.. dunno, maybe you rendered them as 96kbps-mp3's...
Kick is cool, but has too much impact, maybe trim it a bit (eq-wise) so you can make space for other sounds/frequencies
Oh yeah, DO NOT USE COPYRIGHTED SAMPLES PLEASE...
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08-06-2005 13:06 |
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Greyone
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Originally posted by Soi
Hmmm, track could be nice, i see what you're getting at, but overal sounding quality is pretty awkward... And i really haven't got a clue why...
Sounds like you distorted 80% of the samples.. dunno, maybe you rendered them as 96kbps-mp3's...
Oh yeah, DO NOT USE COPYRIGHTED SAMPLES PLEASE... |
Sounds like you distorted 80% of the samples.. dunno, maybe you rendered them as 96kbps-mp3's...
---> mp3 has been rendered as 320kbs , but when i equalised 'n rendered it with that Nero Wave Editor , it was only possible to render on a bitrate from 80kbs (not higher) . Do you know some better encoders (downloadable) with a higher bitrate? thanx
Kick is cool, but has too much impact, maybe trim it a bit (eq-wise) so you can make space for other sounds/frequencies
---> yeah I know , It overdubs the rest of the sounds , but i just wanted to let the kick 'kick' like it should kick.
Oh yeah, DO NOT USE COPYRIGHTED SAMPLES PLEASE
--->samples downloadable from www.dailywav.com , it says :
All sound files are for educational use, research , criticism or review purposes.
btw: everybody uses samples , they just don't admit.
...but allright , no copyrighted samples anymore...
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08-06-2005 13:25 |
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Surya
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That booming kick is way too loud! The other bassline lack bass, on the other hand.
Hoovering is quite nice.
Drums are quite nice
Overall sound isn't great. You're lacking high end.
Concept is not bad, but execution is lacking...
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