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cynik
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goa trance intro - weird melody dont like it
vocal samples.. off time? maybe you wanted it so, anyway dont work well imo, sound somewhat random
reece job is ok, but the tune didnt appeal , personal taste. has some weird cuts, the way it enters and stops is too hard. filtering in those places would help
aw, youre a sucker for that lo-fi bass sounds, thats your style
beats pumpin well, maybe add little variation in them, insert a few beat changes, different patterns etc.
I liked the part in 3:01 when the little beat got reversed after the reverse cymbal. worked well with the choir beneath
this got repetitive very fast tho, must be the repeating vox and the same changes you applied over and over..
not a bad effort but I think you can do much better
5/10
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Originally posted by cynik
beats pumpin well, maybe add little variation in them, insert a few beat changes, different patterns etc.
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there's already 3 diff. drumloops inside, placed in 4 different ways.
and then i didnt count the non-flowin one in the intro with it..
any thx for da review
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05-06-2005 20:08 |
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I think you had misstimed the vocals...
The melody is somehow trance.... maybe if you could work that out....
Acid basses interfere with modulation of the basses of the VST instrument....
Try to separate the frequences( ring modulation would do the work but not I`m not quite sure)
In general it is a good tune.... Intersting idea and interesting words:-)
Good sequencing.... it`s ok....
I would give it 7.5\10
Keep it up
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06-06-2005 13:31 |
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hmmm vanguard or z3ta.......
what the hell is that vocal saying......
lose the dodgy choir sound.....
cheerful innit
quite tuff, but id change the kick drum, or add another more punchy kick......er.....yknow its illegal to even re record a quote out of a film.......mr tarantino wont be impressed.
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08-06-2005 16:39 |
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08-06-2005 16:42 |
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Originally posted by Friscko
what tarantino?
trancy thng as called here = vanguard
reece = mda JX16
acid bass (lofi) = same
eh, thechronic, if ya want to remove it because of copyright shizzl, no problem, it aint that good anyway.. |
i was taling bout the spoken bit........not the skullfuck part but pretty much everything else..yknow "what now..i tell you what now" ....its jsut after the gimp part in pulp fiction.....
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08-06-2005 17:23 |
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08-06-2005 17:25 |
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Damn at first I thought it was an 'Infected Mushroom'-intro, but if you listen to the vocals ... WELL DONE DUDE !!!!!!!! Now this is the shit ! That's the attitude, that's what I'm talking about ... making ya own vocalsamples and using them ...
Tip : use a vocoder ... you can make the voices heavier
Makes it more evil, to bad I don't understand shit, the only thing I understood was ... hilbillyboy , not true with this , I'm gonna get medieval on ya ass ... liked the last one
Now we had the vocals .. now the sounds ... pretty evil just like the vocal ... but the secondary snares are placed very strange ( the dubbles not the main ), they fit in the song, but if you pay attention to the snares it sounds kinda odd ...
Nice kick
Don't like the intro
But now finally someone did this shit with the voices ... I must say ..
You got balls dude and therefore --> 9/10
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08-06-2005 21:36 |
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prob with the vocal was the first part of the sample is spoken (almost whispered) and the second, starting from "ya hear me hillbillybwoy" is shouted..so i had to lower it to make it not go in the red too far when the 2nd part comes in.
But this is just the idea streamed out of me head into FL, so i didnt do any finetuning (yet)..
and with the vocal not being on time, if i timestretched it, it would'v e sounded as my regular voice, should've added more tone lowering in audacity in order to make it sound like it is now, but on time, fitting inside a number of pttns..
to PassDa J. gracias, and pass the pitufo con grande cojones
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08-06-2005 21:46 |
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Originally posted by Friscko
prob with the vocal was the first part of the sample is spoken (almost whispered) and the second, starting from "ya hear me hillbillybwoy" is shouted..so i had to lower it to make it not go in the red too far when the 2nd part comes in.
But this is just the idea streamed out of me head into FL, so i didnt do any finetuning (yet)..
and with the vocal not being on time, if i timestretched it, it would'v e sounded as my regular voice, should've added more tone lowering in audacity in order to make it sound like it is now, but on time, fitting inside a number of pttns..
to PassDa J. gracias, and pass the pitufo con grande cojones |
to PassDa J. gracias, and pass the pitufo con grande cojones
Are you saying my balls are big ?
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08-06-2005 21:56 |
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08-06-2005 22:01 |
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PassDa J.
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Yeah like that shit ... when it comes up in ya head you just write it in your post
I do it all the time
PassDa man Vibrations yeah ! POSITIVE !
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08-06-2005 22:07 |
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10-06-2005 20:00 |
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Is that the original pulp fiction sample or a rereading? Sounds a bit dry. Synth is big but overpowering. Snare is good but ghosts need a more subtle touch - some good elements to this one but sounds a bit much like a beat with a typical VST layered over it. Good, but needs some tweaking.
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12-06-2005 15:35 |
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Friscko
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12-06-2005 15:47 |
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13-06-2005 14:23 |
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Originally posted by Friscko
eh, thechronic, check it please if the vocals are a violation on the copyright rule. And remove it if it is, I dont mind, it's not such a good track after all |
You didn't sample the movie but made the sample yourself, so you're not violating the copyright. Thanks for letting me know but there is no problem
Quick review:
You need to work more with compression. The level in the vocal varies a lot, so put lots of compression on it to make the level more equal. Use a fairly low threshold (around -20dB if you normalised the sample), fairly high ratio (3:1) and a fast release time. Best is to use an analog style plugin that emulates valve or optical compression such as one of the bombfactories or something similar.
The trance line in the intro is too soft, and it's not cutting through in the rest of the track. Fix this with EQ, find a part of the frequency spectrum around 2-3kHz that sounds nice and boost it with a couple dB. Also make it more stereo, that makes it stand out more too. If the intro is too soft it's difficult for a DJ to mix it BTW.
The pad is too soft too, and not really essential imo.
The drums are well done, but add some punch to them by increasing the kick drum level a couple dBs and then putting single band compression on the entire track so it compresses up to 3dB every time the kick drum plays. The snare drum and ghosts sound really great imo, actually the sound of the whole drum kit is excellent, the sounds really fit well together. Hihats could be spread out more in stereo.
Melody lines are OK but not outstanding, there's some variation in it but not enough to keep interest for the whole track.
Bass line could be more powerful, and it's clouding the kick a bit, fix that with EQ, and by making it mono. Bass should always be mono!
Overall it needs a lot of polish, you have good ideas but it needs to be mixed better. Practice using compression and EQ, make the whole mix a bit more sparkly, the general sound is a bit dull. And make more use of the stereo spectrum.
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14-06-2005 07:57 |
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