Politix 
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Registration Date: 24-05-2005
Posts: 48
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Please check out my new track 'Hecuba' and post your comments here!!!
This is the first version of my new song. please tell me what you make of it...
thanks
Politix
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04-06-2005 21:44 |
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DJWitch
Producer
Registration Date: 24-05-2005
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not bad for a first run, some minor points need ironing out though like the rather repetitive bassline/keyboard line, try taking some phrases out and replacing them with other, slightly modified sequences to add interest, the drum patterns are great at the beginning though you could stretch this a little to add a build up quality to the ambience. try a few samples other than the ones in FL, producers can spot them a mile off.(siren, explosion, scream etc)there are loads of royalty free samples out there but failing that if you want to get old skool here is a little magic for you .... plug your headphones into the line in on back of pc use wave recorder to record your self by shouting into the cans, save as wav or mp3 and use freely. BLESSED BE!!
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BLESSED BE TO ALL CREATORS AND LOVERS AND PURVEYORS OF TRUE DRUM AND BASS, PUT FORTH YOUR PASSION AND REASONING AND RAISE YOUR HANDS TO SPACE, DWELL ON THE BEAUTY OF THE MUSIC AND REVELL IN ITS GRACE, SO MOTE IT BE!!..... 
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05-06-2005 21:44 |
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Nick ZZ
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Registration Date: 29-05-2005
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Siren and the machine gun can come up alot, actually the whole track. If you program your own beats in frooty(in frooty it's under fx as db) or reason set your kick at -6 db, this is a general rule of thumb. If you are using an apple computer it will be called a clipping meter. I usually keep the clip meter out for the whole track, every other sound comes around your kick as silly as it may sound. Z
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05-06-2005 23:32 |
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Paki
Cool Steppa
Registration Date: 03-04-2005
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Ok so this is your first track...
The idea is ok... the siren and explosion and staff....
But what considers the sequence...
It is somehow too alike it is repetitive... espetialy the baseline...
Try to layer some more patterns that are diferent.... cut the beats and add some more chords ... the put it back in the origin for exeample( it is just exemple not a tutorial though:-)
What referes to the samples... try to avoid using the original samples that you got....
If you use any beatslicing machine try to cut it change the filters and ect.
Try to program your own beats even simple ones....
Vary the basseline and create more separate patterns that would chage...
Then try to connect the general sequence in intro, main , leading, and outro....
And finally use FFT meters or anything that would analyse the sound to do the mixing....
Overall for first track it is very good....
So I would rate it 7 from 10...
keep it up there is talent in you...
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06-06-2005 13:43 |
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mc loonie
Newbie
Registration Date: 25-06-2005
Posts: 6
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i think its alrite 
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yoooooooooooooooooooooooooooh
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03-07-2005 16:41 |
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