Politix 
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Registration Date: 24-05-2005
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ok...
the beat is cool and the drums sound good. Try and feed the bass in earlier cos otherwise the just the drums gets boring. The leave the bass a bit longer and your intro will balance well.
The drop is tight. On the neg, try to keep the variations and the long draged out drop for the seconf time around. otherwise its cool and the bass does not disapoint. The song has a sweet groove.
the second melody is a bit too chromatic for my taste and the ambiance from the background is too obvious.
the second drop has a nice riff. Try to do a different come up and add a bit to the bass or the drumz the second time around(for the sake of variety). Then again the bass line is very well written and the loop as a whole is tight.
keep it up.
thanks for the lidten
PolitiX
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05-06-2005 13:36 |
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broadside
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Registration Date: 17-01-2005
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mate this is really good . . .
I like the nice clear sound youve got going on. The first drop is quality. The beats and bass are all very very nice. I particularly like the little higher sound that mirrors the bass from 2:12, adds a certain upbeat element to the tune that im really feeling. I well like this song what more can I say? Im not better than you so I cant really criticise anything. I would agree about the chromatic tune over the top - its a bit of a let down, i had have something a bit more flowing to contrast the bassline. ANd maybe a different build and drop the second time round, unless you wnat that as some kind of trade mark. Second time around, would be nice if there were some new elements - like the same bassline but at a differnt octave or just with a different sound to sort of up the tension a bit. But this tune has definately got my head bopping away nicely
Im envious, how long you been producing? What you use?
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05-06-2005 17:08 |
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lol.yes yes norwich crew in the house....... 
nice beats, catchy riff. atmospheric stuff could be a bit thicker sounding......good build up.....b line is catchy.but its a bit twisted individual but at the same time i like it.......which s rare for me as ive gone right off dnb 'cause of all the fucking jump up thats getting played.
considering you just used reason the bass has quite a good sound, but your beats could be sharper and more punchy......
good tune though, but you should let me rewire it into nuendo and then through my valve compressor!!
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05-06-2005 17:38 |
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PassDa J.
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Registration Date: 16-05-2005
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No bad comments on this one, the timing is great, I see you've put a lot of work in this tune and your patience payed of, If I only had the patience to put a lot time in a tune ... that would be great but I don't 
( I always make them on the same day, mostly )
The Sounds all fit together like a glove, nice bassline it doesn't work on the nerves it has a very chill atmosphere but still shaky
The background choirs change perfectly with the main flow .. silent parts are cool, nice slow crashes, and the fat buzz sound is so awsome, I always loved that in a dnb tune ...
Good Job DJ Jimmy C , nice songtitle to
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05-06-2005 20:02 |
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Surora23
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awesome intro drums..nice techy feel...lovin it...
cool intro sounds with thsoe bubbly synths...
nice tension with the filtered Drums...but i was expecting the drop right there and not with the kick roll...
Drop is heavy...kind of a jump up feel...which isnt toally my thing..but the sounds are mint...
variations on teh drums wouldnt go without a miss...
teh second drop is almost exactly like the first...which makes you think youre back in the intro...dont do that (something ive bene told from a few guys) change the second breakdown and drop a lil bit...
And gets a lil repetetive...
Good Points: as much as i hate reason...youcreated a lot of good sounds and this sounds cool as fuck... drums flow smoothly etc... grat feel to the track as its surely a dancefloor jump up track..production is mint...all the sounds are crystall...
Bad points: as i said before could use soe more variations on drums, and something should be changed on the second drop...im not a fan of jump up at all so this got boring (just taste)... good stuff though...
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06-06-2005 04:16 |
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SARIN
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There is some sweet action going on here, consider it's purely made with reason, where I, myself, am not a big fan of...because of certain limitations, but after havin listened to your tune, I might be proven wrong...
Back to the tune, the beats are nicely made, but as other people already have said...it gets a bit repetitive.
So is the main rif, not that's it's bad, it just needs a little change up (hear me talking, I also have major problems with keepin it interesting)
Other than that, a very well produced tune...
Cheers,
SAR!N
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06-06-2005 09:22 |
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Rensi
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Registration Date: 06-06-2005
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I don't know much bout production but I know wat I like and i like this.
only thing i don't like is that the second half is too similar to the first change that and your onto a winner (not a michael winner that is)
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06-06-2005 15:15 |
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Encypher
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Registration Date: 05-06-2005
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Thats the way mate, hoppy grimey bassline, good structure, good steady progression throughout, all round good tune, needs pressing!
keep on rinsin!!
Encypher
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Through meditation i program my heart to break beat and humm basslines in exhillation...
release
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08-06-2005 00:24 |
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D2o
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09-06-2005 18:36 |
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dNk
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Registration Date: 29-02-2004
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listening , intro is nice , drums are good , love background effects
nice synth and melody is very good 
ahh good drop man, love it , ah soo sweet basslines
really fucking good track i love that style woah
this synth what in about 4 min. take it away
i like it very much man . good production 
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