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Paki Paki is a male
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Registration Date: 03-04-2005
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Please check out my new track 'The Vain' and post your comments here!!!

Made in Reason 2.5
FX sound made in Fruity Loops 4.1 with use of Absynth VST.
Don`t know actually what style is this I`ve just made it.




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04-06-2005 11:55
Sudden Death
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Very nice,dude. Abstract and fast melody.
Love all your tracks,keep working in same direction.
Sudden
04-06-2005 14:43
Politix Politix is a male
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first impressions-really cool, powerful bass with a a good powerful beat. The thing which I noticed is that there isn't a proper come up or drop in the song so while all the elements of the song are great, you don't feel like the song has much structure. I do a lot of composition on sheet music and the best piece of advice I was ever given was to build up expectation as much as posible till a climax. For me, you don't really do this. but hey... otherwise, the sounds are really good, the song has this dark edge to it with an interesting buch of sounds and an original beat variation(which you should maybee use more sparingly?).
thanks for the listen
Politix
07-06-2005 14:14
producer_pd producer_pd is a male
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It's Different, it's got its own sound.......The start i liked !! but it's missing builds and break downs !!! ...besides all that not a bad effort...keep it up
18-06-2005 05:36 Homepage of producer_pd
Surya Surya is a male
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Quite similar to your other tracks.

What bothers me a bit is the structure of them. It's always the same
- Short intro with the main pads
- Drums kick in after 4 or 8 bars
- 4 or 8 bars later, the bassline drops
- Goes on a bit without really sigificant changes
- Breakdown with, again, the same elements
- Body part again, quite similar to the first one

There is no tention on your tracks whatsoever. Try building up to a climax every now and then, and then let it drop heavy. Now everythings flat.

The sounds you use sound very synthesised. They're more fitted for old skool house than DnB imo.

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30-06-2005 08:06 Homepage of Surya
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