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HyperFlexed 
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Please check out my new track 'Beautiful Pursuit (WIP)' and post your comments here!!!
A work in progress, starts a bit slow, speeds up and darkens up. I find my rhythms aren't the best, any pointers would be great. This is the first time I've ever uploaded to the site. Thanks to all who can give a listen.
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03-06-2005 21:31 |
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funkydub
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i reckon you should finish tracks before uploading , just my 50 pence..
seems a bit high ended, its not bad , sounds like you know what your doing surely you can finish it
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03-06-2005 23:31 |
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HyperFlexed
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yeah man, I'm a graphics designer, and a musician. Thx guys.
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04-06-2005 00:01 |
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Friscko
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likes:
-choirs they're really good
-incomin flanged drums
-melodies
-intro
dislikes:
-sound of the bass, is it a reece or a full cycle (surge) like bass you wanted to create..
-drums dont come out very well, pump that up!!
try to put in a real breakdown between intro and main part..
6.5/10
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04-06-2005 17:47 |
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HyperFlexed
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Originally posted by Friscko
dislikes:
-sound of the bass, is it a reece or a full cycle (surge) like bass you wanted to create.. |
I was actually trying to create something new
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Friscko
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04-06-2005 18:34 |
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interesting. I really like the trance lines. man it's already over. You should make a break or something building up to a break. It sounds good when the bass comes in. But then I don't really like the sub it seems kind of all over. Keep working on it and it could be cool. Oh yeah did you make your image? It looks pretty cool.