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T.roll 
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Registration Date: 23-06-2004
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Please check out my new track 'Malformed Automation' and post your comments here!!!
Not really finished nor mastered track. Produced after a long delay. However i hope you like it.
Enjoy.
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01-06-2005 16:16 |
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stickbubbly
mad man
Registration Date: 16-09-2004
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very nice.
the way this track progresses is excellent
leads are nice and dirty
melody is hype
maybe boost the bass and turn down a couple of those clicks/cymbals.
the track sounds deadly so far.
cheers
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01-06-2005 20:12 |
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S.O.T.A.
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Registration Date: 13-05-2005
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Hi man this is evil sounds bad ass. I love the feel of the intro the drums are tight! This track is pretty ill! oh man those sounds are sick. Like the second break. feelin it 
COOL
LATER
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01-06-2005 22:31 |
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T.roll
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Registration Date: 23-06-2004
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thx for comments. Look forward for finished version.
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02-06-2005 16:40 |
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D-Lux
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Nice tune man ... But needs a much better mastering ...
Kick sounds a bit "dof" and I don´t like the snare neither...
Needs more mids in the track ... But I love the twiching basslines man
Biggup
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02-06-2005 19:28 |
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funkydub
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Registration Date: 24-05-2005
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the intro's pretty sound
you got them basslines melting into each other nicely with the lfo
wicked breakdowns
although its a bit high ended , like d-lux says bit of mastering bring the mid up a bit
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03-06-2005 01:10 |
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Nosrac
Bag of Hammers
Registration Date: 15-12-2004
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I loved your last track with Soi - voted it my fav for Jan. and this track is right in the same vein. The sounds are beautifully interwoven and slickly textured with reverb and panning (lots of space and depth) - as was your other one. However, the bass drum and the snare (especially) detract from the overall quality of this track - but I realize this is unfinished. This would be my dream track to remix, but I'm sure you want to finish it off before someone else messes around with it.
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14-06-2005 00:02 |
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cynik
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Registration Date: 15-03-2005
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Nosrac pointed this out to me - I'm glad he did so. this is wonderful work, I really feel this.
dark, rolling neurofunk, lfo works are spot on!! youy deffinitely turned the ideas to the full product
yeah, I could not say anything bad about this track except the drumworks.. alright enough programming but lack a bit of something in the eq spectar - especially the snare which would have to be in a broader frequency range, so eq it!!
10/10 for the ideas
8/10 for the soundquality
overall 9/10
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26-06-2005 12:00 |
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Greyone
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Registration Date: 01-04-2005
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eq that bell thing and some othr sounds , aarh me ears. Nice sci-fi sounding intro ...
drums coming in ... ah no ... snare fucks it up (tone of it is too lo) , kick could use a boost.
did you panned some things ... take care that you don't overpan the sounds.
'wowowow' sound is great , as for the drop that follows
drums arent pushing , or layer them , or eq them.
2step hat is too loud , correct that.
good to hear , the 'touches' you gave to some sounds .
Sub is non existent , pump it up.
Big up
for your structure / ambient / basses
8,5/10
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04-11-2005 10:31 |
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Muad'Dib
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Registration Date: 02-12-2003
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Wow, that high freq ride hurts my earts!! The other sounds give nice mystic atmo... the beat comes, and the snare is WAY TOO PHAT! Att a bit punch to it with a compressor.
A question - why the kick is on the left side?! Has some weird effect on the tune...
I guess this is the buildup.. yes.. what sounds! Great, nice combinations and complex strctures. Those wobbling basses are a bit too 'lame', like some Aphrodite jump-up tune... blah...
Ya have nice atmo, but the snare kills it all. Damn. Also, no real hihats (except in some cases) but that's your choice for experimenting, so respekt!
Ok the part at 03:40 is getting better, and the snare now actually adds to the atmo..wow, what an experiment.
Dunno man, lot of pros and cons for ya tune...
I like the experimenting, but the sounds are a bit lame... the snare is too fat, no high freqs
Let's hear the end:
- ok, nice progressive atmo here
- and there it is, the snappy snare! Why didn't you put it in the tune?!
ohh well,
7,5/10
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04-11-2005 12:28 |
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Hidden identity
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Registration Date: 17-02-2005
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Im personaly an admieror of your works,
if songs like this one were on an album, id buy it!
Your variety of digital sounds, i realy liked that.
I thought that volume levels of the instruments and sounds,
were very balanced and harmonious.
The lfos of those synths, though i initialy thought would sound dumb,
were unqiue and better then my own repedative expecation.
i will give it no less then a 10/10.
I dont see any valid error in this musical creation.
And yet how many songs can you make? Each one being a new song that the world has never known. Hence my wanting eternal existance for you and i.
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10-11-2005 03:50 |
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f0re1gn
Cool Producer
Registration Date: 20-12-2004
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Good start, a bit more mastering on those loud hats or cymbals or whatever they are
The beats are weirdly filtered and mastered - too loud for my liking :| Hmm.. i think the bass would sound much better with a different beat, either it's too simple for a bass system like that, or too loud. Good basses though, really like those 
The track is not really my style, i'd completely change the beats :| Basses are good though!
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10-11-2005 15:42 |
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Rudeone
love & light
Registration Date: 15-10-2005
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subject is great, drums need to be fatter, more punch. ride layer maybe. the main part is kinda strange. liked the intro but the whole tune needs a lot more drive. only earplugs here but the sound could be cleaner i think
keep up
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11-11-2005 11:35 |
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