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Please check out my new track 'yo mamma!!' and post your comments here!!!
still raw form begining I know is totally plain I was hoping for some ideas
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31-05-2005 06:21 |
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31-05-2005 16:51 |
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Thank you very much for your generous comments.
I don't know I thought it was kind of an interseting idea I probobly wouldn't have thought about but everyone has their own opinions. I'm open to any suggestions.ThankS
LATER
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31-05-2005 17:26 |
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That was alright... I liked parts of the bass line but i reckon you could do with a beefier bass sound and make it flow a little more. At the moment parts of it just don't seem to fit properly. Also... it dragged on a bit long. Could have done with a bit of variation because it didn't manage to hold my interest too well. I like the way the drums are programmed but I'm not too keen on the sounds used. They sound kinda cheap to me.. if you know what I mean? It's a bit of a crap description really.. sorry. Not a bad effort. 6/10
This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by davewithablade: 31-05-2005 20:39.
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31-05-2005 20:44 |
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zebediah
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You need 2 get out more! You're making way 2 much progress in such short period of time! Your arrangments are seriously sick!! You and Surya should get a tune goin together or remix some of each others stuff. Man that would be crazy! Really feelin this tune ... u need some kinda atmosphere in that blank before the drop. Something opposite of the chaos ... something 2 warn everybody or pull them away so that when the drop hits it catches them off guard. Really f*ckin slammin SOTA! I can tell u got it in your soul. Can't wait 2 hear the finished product. I haven't reviewed tunes in such a long time ...
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31-05-2005 23:29 |
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yeah right surya is the man
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01-06-2005 00:20 |
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Darkside
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structure of this is sorta confused at times, and i can tell you jus sorta used a lotta samples from the site.
the way you use the apache break is tight.
sound quality is pretty nice.
drums go on for too long by themselves in the intro, btw, i think.
its nice that you change everything around so much, keeps it interesting...but it also kinda confuses me on what the main flow is, i kinda lost track of the measures and stuff...
don't use the drum samples from the site so plain, spice em up a lil.
despite bein way too confusing (to me), the sound quality of this is really pretty good. keep it up and you'll have something, man.
6/10.
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01-06-2005 02:35 |
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thanks very much!
What do you mean samples from this site? I didn't know I was. Which ones?
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01-06-2005 02:54 |
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Darkside
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ur drum hits, and the huh! vocal sample are from the samplepacks on the site? you coulda gotten the exact same ones from somewhere else maybe, i dunno..
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01-06-2005 03:10 |
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stickbubbly
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intro defenatly needs some more layers
sick noises. great lead
melody is dark and evol but border line cheesy. i think it it might switch around too much maybe.
drums are cool but a bit flat at some parts. more cymbals or a layerd loop might help.
ideas are good so far
cheers
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01-06-2005 05:22 |
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Originally posted by Darkside
ur drum hits, and the huh! vocal sample are from the samplepacks on the site? you coulda gotten the exact same ones from somewhere else maybe, i dunno.. |
He could record himself making some dumb noises then manipulate them then he could never be accused of using the samplepacks... I based a whole tune around my mate saying "Open your flaps" once
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02-06-2005 00:58 |
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Originally posted by davewithablade
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Originally posted by Darkside
ur drum hits, and the huh! vocal sample are from the samplepacks on the site? you coulda gotten the exact same ones from somewhere else maybe, i dunno.. |
He could record himself making some dumb noises then manipulate them then he could never be accused of using the samplepacks... I based a whole tune around my mate saying "Open your flaps" once |
Please post that song!
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02-06-2005 06:42 |
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Surya
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Cool drums and switches in the intro, but fairly empty with only that ride to spice them up... Try inserting a real intro...
Drop: quite cool reece going on.
Hoover is a bit too loud.
The low-end is a bit lacking since the reece doesn't provide enough bass.
Sounds to me you're trying out the double drop style and it's a fairly good efford, but you still have to learn how to keep it intresting. Now it all sounds very sililar despite all the twists. Try adding more elements (a few more basslines and maybe a few more drumkits too.
Also, don't work bar per bar. Make sets of bars that kinda make one sequence and work with different sets of those...
__ "In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
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02-06-2005 07:43 |
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funkydub
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cool track , very old schooly sounds tho
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03-06-2005 01:01 |
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that was kind of the point
thanks though
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06-06-2005 09:10 |
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20-06-2005 06:52 |
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Greyone
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raw intro: quiet experimented i think
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It should be a bit more equiped with sounds (strings and maybe some ...duno
) . Sounds good for some minutes but than i gets a bit repetitive.
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22-06-2005 23:51 |
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it changes in the second break
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23-06-2005 00:00 |
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