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Please check out my new track 'full metal-rough copy' and post your comments here!!!
another track that isn't finished just thought I'd get some feedback
thanks
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29-05-2005 21:55 |
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29-05-2005 22:25 |
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Darkside
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lovely idea.
takes me back to the days of older dnb.
there are a couple of level issues tho. you might want to lower the lead bell-ish fm sound a little and make the drums a little louder.
well, beat jus dropped and i guess you did make those drums louder 
you're gonna have to layer that amen with more drum samples, making your own beat over top of it, if you really want it to be punchy. it sounds really flat now.
extremely repetitive around the end, but i figure you were jus kinda filling up space, since you're not hardly done with it yet.
add more fx and changeups around the place.
make the reece a lil more nasty.
boost the kick drum.
interesting ideas in this one tho, keep it up
6/10
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30-05-2005 00:55 |
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equipped
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30-05-2005 11:58 |
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Surora23
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cool floaty intro...drums are super thin...didnt know if that was intentional or not?
the drop seemed to come abruptly...didnt liek it at all...Those bells should be cut out...drops usually want to be clean...without all the extra nonsense in teh bg...bring them in later....second the drumes bro...boost them drums...best thing to do is layer kicks and snare under an amen...but also boost those levels...
The lil reece is ok i guess...but imo it sounds tooo buzzy....just like its a simple lil synth line...its gotta be more nasty, growly etx...the onyl way to change that is to layer or change it completely..also it hass too much mid...use a parametric eq to drop the mid..i also find the melody to be a bti cheesy...buyt theres worse out there so thats personal opinion...
Track gets pretty repetive without anynew variations...
Overall this track has some decent sounds...and decent ideas...but they need to be taken muhc much further...keep workin on this one...
but a 4/10 for now...it lacks a lot... 
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Rinse it OUT!!!! 
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30-05-2005 17:38 |
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anf0 D
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pads are nice
amen style beats sound good
i do like the trippy arpy pad thing...
the bass is farkn good i rekons lol
what did u use to make it, if u dont mind me asking.
the bass change ups are sweet.
beats do need to be more out there in the mix.
keep workin it fo sure, i enjoyd listening... bass is cool
7/10
could be much higher, but yes work needed
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31-05-2005 00:03 |
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zebediah
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Really like everything you're producin lately! This just doesn't sound finished enough for me 2 give u a proper review. I'll tell ya this: Wicked so far! Finish it and i'll give ya a nice big review!
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01-06-2005 22:36 |
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equipped
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Hot Dog, once again lovin this track to the max! You certianly know how to manipulate reason! ++Stu Maggoo++
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02-06-2005 07:05 |
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Surya
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Intro sounds great man, nice combinations.
The amen you use in the intro is in the same frequency spectrum though and lacks power. ReEQ.
Drop: Cool basslines and switches, but the track is almost strickly high-mid and high-end. Where's the punch? You should start your mix all over again from scratch!
That stuff from the intro, how nice it may be, shouldn't be overused though, try not using it thru the whole track. It makes the track sound the same the whole time, making it a bit boring, despite it's short runtime...
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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02-06-2005 08:07 |
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S.O.T.A.
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damn really? From scratch?
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02-06-2005 08:10 |
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Surya
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Yeah, best thing to do imo
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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02-06-2005 08:12 |
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06-06-2005 09:13 |
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20-06-2005 06:51 |
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like the spacey effects you got there but i think this song realy needs some
variation it's like 2 minutes of the same loop over an' over an' over....
5/10 for originality
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21-06-2005 22:28 |
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S.O.T.A.
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some dnb's like that sorry to bore you 
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22-06-2005 00:12 |
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Greyone
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got some nice atmospheric trance stuff in the intro but some sounds should be volumed down a bit. That rave sound is nice but should be performed to a lower octave ( just get that bass like a bass should be)
sound choise is nice alldough some mo variation could be better ( high end in the drums and some mo effex.)
Just get this one a bit more trance with fx and it will be a nice trancestep track.
Keep ya head up Sota
you're on the good way.
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22-06-2005 23:41 |
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I don't know I'm kind of scared of the levels it not mastered ..again sorry for that 
Curious as to what equip you used. Drumz definetly do need a boost. The two soundz you got in the background. The dark chord progression is what iIm interested in. Not The bell's though they do have there place. The chord progression is nice and dark. Make that more of a focus in the track, throw a few different preset's over the midi arrangment. Some automation with your sampler ect. I just feel that element of your track could use allot more focus. Basically im saying more variation would add allot to this track. Cheers and thank's for the listn 
