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Surora23 
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Please check out my new track 'Mercury (preview only)' and post your comments here!!!
Heres a little soemthign that im also try to catch the hears of at skimrock and at ozone 320...
The finished revamped version wont even have the same name or a lot of the sounds...so this is pretty much an exclusive preview...
Kind of a spacy kreppy roller... Enjoy the sounds guys 
Made with FL5 and a bunch of new goodies... Thanks to spud...and the rest... big ups...
Enjoy guys
moderator edit: surora has uploaded a new version of this track, check it out here!
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29-05-2005 19:53 |
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Nick ZZ
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29-05-2005 21:12 |
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Darkside
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changin the name on me huh?
the intro still needs to be filled up a little more.
that sample, the one you also used in meltdown...its weird to reuse stuff that stands out that much, try to find something else to replace that.
ur drumbeats have improved over time, definitely. pretty fresh sound, nice snares and patterns. it's nice how there's nothing off-center, all your other sounds wrap around the beat very nicely. assembly line "huh!" isn't overused.
use that little filtered synth stab, the one with only three notes, during the bassline, to make it flow better, because the bassline still sounds like its comin from a diff. track, it sounds too random.
the arpy madness breakdown...ugg still doesnt fit with that bassline at all...you gotta do somethin with that...carry some of the sounds over or something.
overall it just needs to flow better, a dnb song shouldn't be played out in acts like this (act 2: minimal section; analog bassline and beat with hip hop vocal samples; goes directly into act 3: nothing but trancy arps)
clean production tho, and they're all good sounds, just gotta put em together right.
7/10.
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29-05-2005 21:20 |
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stickbubbly
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the intro is nice and spacey. goes on a bit too long for me though.
drums sound crisp. kick is really nice.
lead is dirty. luv it
great track so far, lots of intesting stuff going on there.
could use some more bass perhapse.
cheers
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30-05-2005 00:36 |
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equipped
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30-05-2005 01:03 |
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Surora23
Agressive Melodic Disorder
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cheers...glad you guyslike so far...all the feedback is more than welcome...keep em comin guys...its still a work in progress
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30-05-2005 03:26 |
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Fc101
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Likin it a lot mate. The intro is nice and dark.The beats sound big and crisp with lots of punch in the kicks. Not so keen on the igher synth at 1:30 sounds a bit cheesy. Bass sounds really good when it drops, especially with the pause but does get a bit repetative. Really well produced overall
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31-05-2005 16:04 |
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Surora23
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any more guys? please ingore the shit rating..its all ultradarks fault...bastard... 
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03-06-2005 06:49 |
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zebediah
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Hell yeah this is wicked! The intro sounds fun 2 mix. The drums remind me a bit of Mampi's. I'm definitely liking the snares, they really stand out! The melody is interesting and very mature. Very original sounding!
Awesome breakdown!!!!! That synth is ugly!!!!! I would buy this!!!!!! The beats roll real f*ckin hard!
Second breakdown is sick! Real deep! I love how it drops back into the bass and thunderous beats! It's real natural. Doesn't sound like it needs much werk.
Illegal shit! 10/10
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03-06-2005 07:33 |
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funkydub
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good, good , loads of variation in this with your beats
i'll write a review when its finished, not keen on reviewing ive done enough today, i'd rather just say whether a tune is good or bad
finish it
peace
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03-06-2005 23:09 |
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Surora23
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Originally posted by funkydub
good, good , loads of variation in this with your beats
i'll write a review when its finished, not keen on reviewing ive done enough today, i'd rather just say whether a tune is good or bad
finish it
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note to all...this one is rather different form teh actual final as it was finished today...now i await the time to send to skimrock and ozone
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03-06-2005 23:51 |
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DJWitch
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05-06-2005 21:06 |
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Surora23
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Originally posted by DJWitch
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Rinseoooooooooh.... nice choon there surora, dirty bass lines make me shift uncomfortably in my seat, the (as yet) incomplete drum track is doin jus fine and the melodic stab is used to great effect. i can see where you wanna take this tune man and im not goin to tell you what elements of the track to add as you already have a good bassis for a killa plate jus stik wit it and make it longer.... Blessed be!! 
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the new version is already finished...and has been agreeed to be released...i just have to change a few things...i will give you guys a final update on the finished work...and give youa release date whene everythuing is sorted..
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06-06-2005 03:29 |
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Surya
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Heavy how the drums drop in, nice! Nice switches and edits too
Sounds are quite trancey again, but not too.
Nice n dirty filtered bass coming in. I hope it gets more bass when it drops?
Ah, it does. Sweat 
Drums here need more hats and rides though, doesn't sound phat enough, an bit too clean acually.
Ah, trance arp comin in. Now that is a bit too trancey for my taste. Nicely done though.
Love the bassline man, great pitching and stuff.
When do we get the finished tune?
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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18-06-2005 11:04 |
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Surora23
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Originally posted by Surya
Heavy how the drums drop in, nice! Nice switches and edits too
Sounds are quite trancey again, but not too.
Nice n dirty filtered bass coming in. I hope it gets more bass when it drops?
Ah, it does. Sweat
Drums here need more hats and rides though, doesn't sound phat enough, an bit too clean acually.
Ah, trance arp comin in. Now that is a bit too trancey for my taste. Nicely done though.
Love the bassline man, great pitching and stuff.
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ill shoot you guys one of the like 5 finished versions...the owner of skimrock and i went through so many lil changes...the final for them sounds almost totally different in teh starts and finish...
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18-06-2005 17:04 |
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The intro did sound a bit light. Your sound's and sample's are great. I could learn allot here with your tight structure. The drum's are nice and heavy, the overall track is heavy. Great sound quality. 
