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cynik cynik is a male
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Please check out my new track 'sentiment [UNFINSHED PREVIEW]' and post your comments here!!!


not been posting tunes in a while, not having time for it and such..

I've been working on this, it is still in relative early stages, so feedback greatly appreciated!!!

software:
-Reason 2.5
-Izotope Ozone DX
-Waves 3.5

-Sound Forge 7.0

_edit: forgot to mention Sound Forge


This track has been deleted on the producer's request

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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by cynik: 28-05-2005 21:46.

28-05-2005 20:57 Homepage of cynik
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one question, what are u using as the host for waves and izotope......??? and you really dont need the ozotope if youve got waves.....it tends to munch on a lot of ram and cpu, and i was never that impressed.

review later
28-05-2005 21:43
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host was Soundforge.. I used it for some of the sounds.. I could say Reason 100% but it isnt, at least 1% was those

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28-05-2005 21:47 Homepage of cynik
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Pleased Cool track, Some really fat and heavy soundz going on. The drum's could be a a bit more buzy especially from 5:44 to 5:47. Some more hitz like bongo's would sound sweet. Cheers and thank's for the listen. Bigup +++Stu Maggoo+++

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er....im three and a half minutes into this and im still waiting for the drop.........theres just no real impact. the sound selection is good but theres no contrast in the track, you need to work on distinguishing the intro and the first break a bit more.
29-05-2005 16:04
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you never stop the brittle break beat, the intro one, you should definatly stop that for drops....

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29-05-2005 19:31 Homepage of Halph-Price
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yeah if there was a drop, n more low end in the kick.
this track would be alright... the synths sound cool, just need to do some cool arrangment with them... instead of that tekno structure... otherwise it gets abit repeatative.

some cool bass synths in there.

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30-05-2005 00:21 Homepage of anf0 D
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cool intro...some really really weird things you did with those drums..it wasnt bad....just really realyl weird...and different...which is good...but i didnt totallylike it... (just personal preference...it was still somethign a lil new to me so tahts good) im about 2 mins in and this sounds like intro... its seriosuly jsut a driving snare...and all the elements around it dont change...

some really really cool sounds for sure...but imo...reason sucks for sequencing...its just good for sounds...use it as a vsti and get logic or Fruity...my 2 cents on that though...

BUT UH... i think you could go diff with teh drums...it sounds like you used redrum? and redrum is gay...that kick needs to be super bosted...id say use a completely different sound too...

Im not sure where your drop is...but where ever it is...make sure you have a lil breakdown before hand..otherwise you dont hear it...especiilly if it doesnt change form teh intro sounds...

Over all teh sounds seem find but the drums ar ehorrible my friend...some really really cool ideas...but your mastering need work...and you gotta work on the variations much more...this could be a super cool track...just not in its state right now.. Bigup

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30-05-2005 17:46
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now listening.....

snare in intro sounds weak could be my speakers...

oh no now its a bit fatter......

nice layering of atmos....

need to stop that beat for a bit during the breakdown.....

or has it dropped?......

beat needs filling out loads all ther seams to be is a weak kick next to a snappy snare and hardly any in-betweens.....

nice synths sounds plenty of variation......

once again not the sort i make but good effot nice and deep just needs some beef.....but then agian it could be the speakers i'm using to listen!!!

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30-05-2005 17:56 Homepage of D2o
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not your speakers, the drums are the least Ive done in this..
and as for breaks, really did almost nothing about it - as it says "unfinished"

I dont even have a concept to the structure, sounds weird but all was just expansion from a loop I made with some sounds I did spent a little time on.

but when it gets finished (I really need some continuus time with it, know what I mean like, 6 hours straight) you'll see Surora Big Grin with the redrum.. yeah.

only, I dont understand, Surora, what did you mean by mastering? does it not require like, a whole studio? this is a bare wav export, maybe you meant something like eq-ing individual channels exported?

btw thanks everyone for the feedback Bigup

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30-05-2005 22:56 Homepage of cynik
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only, I dont understand, Surora, what did you mean by mastering? does it not require like, a whole studio? this is a bare wav export, maybe you meant something like eq-ing individual channels exported?


i meant more or less the mixdown..same as mastering but nah it doesnt require a studio..just the proper vst's in which reason doesn have...which is why i hate reason..

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Originally posted by cynik
only, I dont understand, Surora, what did you mean by mastering? does it not require like, a whole studio? this is a bare wav export, maybe you meant something like eq-ing individual channels exported?


i meant more or less the mixdown..same as mastering but nah it doesnt require a studio..just the proper vst's in which reason doesn have...which is why i hate reason..


lol. but ya never gonna get a professional sounding master using fruity loops either........thats why ya rewire. you lot need to worry about getting the mix right, get your sound choice right and get the levels of each instrument to where you want them....if you want a pro sound after this then you gotta pay........look on your vinyl.it usually says produced/programmed etc etc by the artis then mastered by so and so at the exchange or some where else..........its an art form in itself
01-06-2005 22:26
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Cool how the drums come in.

Your kick is... erm... like missing. I can hardly hear it. Hats could use a boost too. The lack of the kick is one of the reasons why the tune never seems to acually drop.

Your pads and stuff sound very slick and stuff, but too synthesised. Try getting a more analogue sound Wink

I started wondering though what the main theme of the tune was, there doesn't seem to be one.

You've got some nice elements and stuff, but the execution really needs more work

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18-06-2005 10:56 Homepage of Surya
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