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Politix 
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Registration Date: 24-05-2005
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Please check out my new track 'Break 'n' Enter' and post your comments here!!!
This a song i've just started working on. I did it on fl with some generators . I also used soundforge 4.5. there a still thing I not happy about but before I do the final version, I'd like some imput..
thanks
Politix
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27-05-2005 17:47 |
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cynik
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ok, here's a review
nice intro but nothing special
that main sound, "lead" is an interesting idea but it needs a change, or better - several changes. it gets very reppetitive, boring quite fast and drops out and back into track too much on it's own, leaves a feeling of being sticked onto the track with not much sense..
some levels must be fixed, the drums are a little weak. youve got some instruments playin all the time, for example that synth in the backround. it feels way too distant, that lead swallows everything up
I like the way you introduce the beat at 1:46 - that part after should be reworked tho, dont really like the way it moves into almost ambiental sound.. too fast a change
no subbasses whatsoever, but no bassline, feels it is missing in that part too
dunno, has potential but a lot of work is needed too
_edit: fixed typing errors 
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by cynik: 27-05-2005 20:21.
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27-05-2005 20:19 |
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S.O.T.A.
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27-05-2005 21:08 |
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Victom#1
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In my experience FL is a rough program for making good dnb. My friend makes wonderful goa trance with it, but all his dnb sounds like this.
This isn't bad but it really does need a lot of work, the kick needs to come thru a little more and a little more consistent structure with the drum patters as a whole might help. They seem to come in very randomly and its sounds a little funny.
I like your strong lead, I would have changed the notes a little but it has an interesting sound so I think you should keep it. But at least cut it out sometimes, or give it more variation, whether you change notes or run it thru filters or something.
This song has a future if you can get it on track. Good luck ^^
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27-05-2005 21:22 |
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TommyB
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Registration Date: 27-05-2005
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honestly, it's kinda boring, the drums need work, i hate that snare (maybe it's just me) that wah thing is f'n great. not to beat a dead horse, but ya need some bass in there. if it were one i was workin on, i'd keep it and put some thought into it
i'd say fix it up and repost
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i'm gonna get reemed when i finally post a song
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i'll keep 
and i can do this myself 
(or just be harsh and i'll have to learn)
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28-05-2005 03:29 |
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dubcupboard
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Easy Man
Lent my ears to your tune - 'break n enter'
Good effort but there were certain things
I think u can improve on;
Your kick drum was weak dude, could hardly hear it, also the tune
itself seemed quiet, had to crank the vol up full on to proper hear it!
The actual break itself lacked variation,ie, no fills in between the bump and tick
just busy hats over the top.
The lead riff was ok on the intro, but got a bit boring when it kept poppin up
in the tune all the time sounding the same.
That backgroung synth wouldn't drop off either making the tune sound like
a continuos intro, try some variation with it or change up the riff man.
Apart from that not a bad try but to be honest sounded more experimental.
till next time
Dubz.
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03-06-2005 20:53 |
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dNk
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listening
kick need more energy , more fx in intro colud be lovely
work with EQ (equaliser) in FL its a Parametric EQ
i work with FL too 
I dont know what recommend you , many thing you should take away and put good sounds , just listen more and carrefully different tracks with famous artists , but i see idea is good , cheers
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03-06-2005 21:26 |
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Surya
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Your levels are way off. The main leadsound (which becomes annoying quite fast) is very up front, all the rest is puched to the back...
There is no bass so to speak of.
The drums sound extremely standard, the hats are very unconvincing. Spice things up a bit!
Work on your mastering...
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17-06-2005 08:16 |
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Hi whats happenin? Just listening to your track. It's pretty interesting. The drums could be a little stronger in the beginging. I like the wahs and it's pretty cool how it beraks into a dnb drummin. The middle feels a little empty though. I like the beat change ups and it's cool ho w it stays with the dark atomsphere. You should make it louder and rippin .It's nice to hear variety.I like your track 
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