aiku 
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Please check out my new track 'you lie' and post your comments here!!!
I can say for the song only that, I made it 2-3 hours for total and I'm not there with the song where I want to reach..
I just wanna hear a little bit critics and advice from You 
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25-05-2005 22:55 |
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S.O.T.A.
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U have some sick ass beats. I like the sample where is it from? I like the phasing and those dirty subs are nice. It gets a little repeatitve after a while. I notice the change after the second break maybe make it more obvious might sound nice. Maybe some more accent sound effects. This track is still bad as fuck man!
COOL LATER
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26-05-2005 17:37 |
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Darkside
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omg im so glad i scrolled down to check this now
nice tune man, i've heard many good things from the contributors to the twstr sets.
nice crazy phasin'.
good drumbeat and filtering out, sweet vocal sample. nice bassline too, and overall hi quality sound. no real problems with that. needs a steady atmo tho i think, or maybe just some subtle delays and more reverbs to make everything flow a little better. otherwise not much i can really say bad about this, sweet tune!
7/10
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29-05-2005 03:03 |
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Surora23
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a lot of nice ideas for the intro...really nice way you looped your breaks...relaly liked that...
i really have no negative comments...coulda been longer but other than that...this is some good shit for sure...enjo0yed it...
could be a lot longer imo..but damn..some solid shiz...
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Rinse it OUT!!!! 
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29-05-2005 19:14 |
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Surya
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Very nice drop
Heavy shit!
Now where's the rest of it? I want more
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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17-06-2005 08:02 |
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PassDa J.
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Damn dude this is the shit you're crazy !!!!
What where you thinking about when you made the song? Hell? or SATAN?
Cool tune dude love the chaos, love the fucking sounds love evereything ...
I hear this boy is the devil himself
8/10
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17-06-2005 17:15 |
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ethex
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this is sick but its too repeative!
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27-06-2005 19:54 |
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DJWitch
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AS IN SHIZZLE MY.... BLESSED BE TO THEE OH MAKER OF DARKNESS AND AS THEY SAID ABOVE ME, MORE!!, NOW!!! ITS TOO SHORT FOR OUR LIKING 
SICK THOUGH.....
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BLESSED BE TO ALL CREATORS AND LOVERS AND PURVEYORS OF TRUE DRUM AND BASS, PUT FORTH YOUR PASSION AND REASONING AND RAISE YOUR HANDS TO SPACE, DWELL ON THE BEAUTY OF THE MUSIC AND REVELL IN ITS GRACE, SO MOTE IT BE!!.....
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27-06-2005 21:22 |
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cynik
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top notch! 2-3 hours? you really know your stuff man
love the edits, dont know where do you want it to be? IMO you're already there.. just lenghten it up..
killer!
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https://soundcloud.com/tsai-vidro-voves
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29-06-2005 10:59 |
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optikal_assassin
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Originally posted by TechDiff
This is some funny stuff, Totaly over the top but really well produced, the mix is really good. But I think it could do with something new in there. the tune doesnt really extend beyond the initial idea.
I like the synth work and the vibe is cool, just needs more of something, a big drop to something different maybe.
Good tune.
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pretty much agree with what techdiff had to say on this number. I just found this one scrolling back through the older posts and thought it was worthy to mention something. I agree with what he said about it not really extending beyond the intial idea. It seems it hit one point and didn't go much further into it than that. I think it would've helped being longer for starters, but that's plainly obvious. this one's got some serious potential to tear shit up. I know this post is rather old and this track has prolly gone out the window, but i think it'd be a shame to have scrapped it. I like it man. Just not a full 10 as it's not full production, but i think with some new elements and a full track, it'd be an easy 10.
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09-08-2005 05:22 |
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aiku
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Originally posted by cynik
top notch! 2-3 hours? you really know your stuff man
love the edits, dont know where do you want it to be? IMO you're already there.. just lenghten it up..
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lenghten up is the most difficult thing like that the song does'nt change boring etc.
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19-08-2005 14:08 |
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cynik
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well of course, I really wanted to say the idea, concept is there.. you know, you dont have to add anything but think about insertion, copying stuff over and doing little bits of changes etc.
not that fun part of the job but you have to be careful as you said not to make it boring
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https://soundcloud.com/tsai-vidro-voves
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