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DJWitch DJWitch is a male
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Registration Date: 24-05-2005
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WootWoot BASS HEADS!!! BEING NEW TO THIS SITE AND TO WRITING/PRODUCING, WOULD YOU ALL HAVE A LISTEN TO THIS LITTLE DITTY OF MINE AND GIVE ME SOME FEED BACK AS I LIVE IN THE MIDDLE OF NOWHERE WITH NO NEARBY DRUMNBASS CLUBS AND FEEL ALL SAD AND ISOLATED SO I WROTE THIS....and apparently i cant upload my track so please email me and i will send it.......dj.witch@gmail.com

This post has been edited 3 time(s), it was last edited by DJWitch: 24-05-2005 22:25.

24-05-2005 22:12
S.O.T.A. S.O.T.A. is a male
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Registration Date: 13-05-2005
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whats up just listening to your track...I like the first ragga sample but then the second one is kind of off and I personally don't really like it. The girl sample is cool but it dosen't quite feel right maybe if you effected it with something. Your drums are pretty cool you should layer the amens with individual drum hits. The second ragga sample is sick. You should use that one earlier. The bassline is cool. It's kind of random in the end how it just starts up again like that. I'm not trying to be mean but it needs to be structured better. It feels like it's a clash of two different tracks. One is kind of electro and the other is some ragga stuff. I like the electro but it should be one or the other. I'm not saying that I don't like your track it just needs some work. Thanks for sending it to me. Send me some more!
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30-05-2005 08:05
cynik cynik is a male
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this tune has a vibe to it - easily felt

lol "hoppin on the dancefloor" really does it, with everything sticking out in such a funny way..

Im not into these kind of synthworks at all, the polyphony idea in particular..

drums are cool tho, as sota said layer them to achieve a punchier effect.

the structure needs rework also, seems pretty random now. theres no break stop or drop idea but thats not a real necessity unless you wanted a dancefloor track

this seemed repetitive after a short while too

dont get discouraged now, this is ok for a first effort anyway


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