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teknyne 
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Please check out my new track 'untitled (early preview)' and post your comments here!!!
very early preview of this tune, tell me wot u think, where to go?
This track has been deleted because of copyright violation
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22-05-2005 00:26 |
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k.c.walsh
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Man lovin those nasty sondz you've used! Very angry sounding indeed! Add more anger to those voice samples, mabye use a Lo-Fi effect to crunch them up, Kontact 2 does this really well, Definatley a beast in progress, can't wait to hear finall track. Thank's for the preview.**EQUIPPED** 
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22-05-2005 04:50 |
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Paki
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Very horror sound in here in the intro 
The drums are too lod compress them or reduce the volume...
The basses needs to come out....
But the beats are very awesome and very good variations....
The baseline at 1:50 is very cool....
Don`t like the vocals....
But the second part of the tune is very good... dark
Still the drums are too loud...
Ok so I`m looking forward to the final version
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23-05-2005 14:59 |
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Surora23
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this apparent is suppose ot be a decent preview so lets give a listen shall we...
cool intro...very dark sounds...i like....nice metalic drums...but i noticed theyre from teh Dave Akuma sample packs... Program your own drums bro...
the break down had some cool sounds....but the drop was weak...beef the reece up...distort it...its wayy too lofi and has no power... add some reverb on the vocals or something there too dry...
Overall the sounds arent very original...nore are the ideas...its nothing aspiring....this wouldnt even hold up a few yrs back...
Work on the eq's and program your own drums...fallow it up with a new melody and sounds for the reece...get your hands on some good vst's...
5/10
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23-05-2005 17:45 |
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teknyne
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sorry if me learning how to make tunes has offended you!!!!
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23-05-2005 17:52 |
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Surora23
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Originally posted by teknyne
sorry if me learning how to make tunes has offended you!!!! |
lol dude there is no offense? lol relax...but do you honestly think if i told you the track was good itd amke you learn anymore?
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23-05-2005 18:20 |
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teknyne
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Originally posted by Surora23
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sorry if me learning how to make tunes has offended you!!!! |
lol dude there is no offense? lol relax...but do you honestly think if i told you the track was good itd amke you learn anymore? |
yes i agree 100%, but u didnt really give any advice or tips to improve my production. maybe i dont know how to program my own breaks yet! is a little helpful advice to much to ask? that is after all the main reason i signed up to this forum in the 1st place
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23-05-2005 18:25 |
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Surora23
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all good no worries... aight...well what programm are you using? breaks take time as well as everything else...so dont be in a hurry :p
For your reece...jsut use a different sound...its too lofi and wont do any good...Get some good vst's and vsti's such as absynth... albino...etc...
Cut the low end of your reece, and cut the mid a little...leaving more room fro your drums...
also get your hands on some better drum loops if youre gonna use loops for now...those are a bit lofi although the programming in those are sick... i dont really know waht else to comment on..if your jsut starting it takes time to learn... keep it upo though...
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23-05-2005 18:30 |
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teknyne
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Originally posted by Surora23
all good no worries... aight...well what programm are you using? breaks take time as well as everything else...so dont be in a hurry :p
For your reece...jsut use a different sound...its too lofi and wont do any good...Get some good vst's and vsti's such as absynth... albino...etc...
Cut the low end of your reece, and cut the mid a little...leaving more room fro your drums...
also get your hands on some better drum loops if youre gonna use loops for now...those are a bit lofi although the programming in those are sick... i dont really know waht else to comment on..if your jsut starting it takes time to learn... keep it upo though... |
cheers, thats the kind of review im after. i dont want people praising me for a badly made tune, i just want help learning and where better to look than other producers?
just listened to your latest track, i liked it a lot but feel im in no place to comment about it. lets have no beef then eh? just less of the nasty remarks like 'this wouldnt stand up even a few years ago' theres just no need for it.
peace
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23-05-2005 18:35 |
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Surora23
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that wasnt to offend you...but the sounds are a bit dated is what i was saying...And so even so that the soundsa are dated..it still wouldnt hold up...not a nasty remark was just a point..use some more...up to date sounds thats all...
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23-05-2005 18:40 |
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teknyne
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fair enough. thanx for your help
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23-05-2005 18:42 |
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mcsav
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Really like this track, wicked vocals and bassline,
Can't really say much more than that as i'm not experience enough to.
Looking forward to hearing the final product.
Sav.
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24-05-2005 14:29 |
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teknyne
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cheers dude sample is outa fight club mate, finshed tune will be posted soon, sounds way different now
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30-05-2005 16:09 |
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anf0 D
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Originally posted by Surora23 this wouldnt even hold up a few yrs back...
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yeah, u are annoying lol something about you that really bothers me...
lol maybe its ur avatar, sorta face id like to punch
anyways onto this track....
intro is abit weird n slow.
the vox samps are alright, could use some reverb or dely.
beats sit nice in the mix.
the scream is alright, probably use it abit much, and it could use some reverb or dely, just so it flows well, and the sample doesnt end abruptly.
drop is cool.
bass is mean, i likey. some nice effects on the bass.
there is nice variation in the beats....
then it cuts n dies....
finish it n polish it
7/10
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This post has been edited 2 time(s), it was last edited by anf0 D: 31-05-2005 00:56.
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31-05-2005 00:54 |
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Friscko
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likes:
-the things done with the drums before the bass drops in
-vocal choise (but wasnt it asked to not pst tunes with copyrighted samples?)
unlike:
-sound of the drums, gosh is that my ear bleedin? (filter the highs on it..)
-basssound sometimes doesnt come out well
get the eq's fined out, bring in a filter on the drums, and get the bass sound a lil up
7.5/10
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31-05-2005 19:32 |
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teknyne
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cheers for the tips people. final version will be posted soon i hope, draggin out a bit as im workin on another tune for a remix comp on kunninmindz net radio. also check out my show sundays 6-8
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31-05-2005 21:32 |
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Surya
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Cool intro!
Drums kicking in. Quite phat!
Drop: nice reece, but it lacks low end. The drums are slighly too choppy. Nice switches. The vocal during the drums is not needed.
Great edits
Work on the sound and levels a bit more!
Now where's the rest of it?
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