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mentalist
Registration Date: 17-01-2005
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. . . got my head bopping away nicely, and thats despite the fact that im hungover to fuck, so big up! 
some might say that this needs a it more variation, but its sort of valid just to let the thing ride through.
the best thing about this tune is the bass. i also like all the random sounds that youve strung together for the "melody", the beats are nice aswell, i like em when they up it a bit at about 4:01 particularly.
my main beef with this track is just that it isnt very memorable, its just sort of filler material. it could do with being made a bit more memorable, and as i said, on a personal taste thing, i reckon it gets a bit monotomous. but its pretty good.
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21-05-2005 10:41 |
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Rude
I'm gonna get you
Registration Date: 06-01-2005
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sharp hihats, muffled drums... don't really like the shakers...
drop: bass is too lo again, kick needs layering, snare needs layering...
bit repetitive after a while...
but those are all bad comments.
your bleeping stuff is just a bit too loud too...
back to the low bass... gets kinda boring...
I'll just shut up cuz my tracks are repetitive too 
greetz
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21-05-2005 12:34 |
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Paki
Cool Steppa
Registration Date: 03-04-2005
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Intro wit the hihhats is ok but don`t like the tambourines...
Drums are ok ..
Like the maelstrom sounds in the background...
The baseline is not good it could be more louder....
And variable baseline it wouldn`t harm...
The beats are ok and they fit with the melody....
Exept the hihats somehow they are overloaded...
Interesting panning of the background mermaids.
Could use some more variation or more different patterns it is all the same exept the delay melody in the 3rd part of the tune....
Overall it is a good tune I would rate it 7 from 10
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23-05-2005 15:05 |
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Politix
Producer
Registration Date: 24-05-2005
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I like the beginning of the track although I think that the intro could be a bit longer. The drums come in really well although the snare is a bit weak. I don't much like the first bass but the second is wicked. If you made it a bit softer and doubled the speed of the hihat the song would have more drive. I also liked the cotrast between the reflective anbiance and heavy bass. The drop off is good but seems slightly abrupt. The come up is good the drums could be sharper. Overall I liked it alot though.
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24-05-2005 23:15 |
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Halph-Price
Zombie Algorithm
Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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hi, no offence to this commnet, but it's about your tracks overall, maybe it's cuz of whatever you use to mix with, but your highend shelf is usually pretty shrill. the hats int he start are pretty much it, but your last song had them in it too... at like 14.5khz ... they kinda fit in the drop but in the intro it's an ear sore... could use a bit of verb to smooth it out..
also for whatever reason your song cuts at like 15khz... just a bit odd, maybe try rendering at 192kbps, that usually covers the full spectrum. i strongly suggest that.
i love the mid of the song, great atmosphere sounds...
sounds liek you got a lo-pass filter on the snare... but distortion on it first...
gets repative, not much of a melody in it, but everything else is nicely done. really nicly done.
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25-05-2005 19:15 |
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S.O.T.A.
SHADOW STAR
Registration Date: 13-05-2005
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whats up just listening to your track. I really like the name and right from the start it grabs my attention. Your sounds in the intro are sick real electronic. The first drop the feedback is a very nice touch sounds very pro. It could be a little more lively but thats just me. I feels like some nice dark tech step so nice work. The only other thing is for some reason panning sounds strange to me. Anyway wicked tune!!!
LATER
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25-05-2005 19:38 |
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equipped
tired
Registration Date: 20-05-2005
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Man the overall beef and madness come's in like a gem at 1:44, and the build up to that is a fantastic array of analog mayham. Your samples are sweet, and the work you put in to this track ,is prevalent dude! Look into a nice {hardware} twin tube compresser. It will shurly warm thing's up! "PEACE" 
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26-05-2005 10:41 |
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