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Darkside 
Old-School Rolla
Registration Date: 02-01-2005
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kinda seems to be too much hi end in this first part. drumbeat is sorta messy, has its ups and downs, but when the steady hihat line comes in its a little better. phone idea is kinda weird.
the new line after the drop is ok, but gets a lil bland after a while. low bouncy fx, if you can understand which one i mean, doesnt really seem to fit. the synth sounds a lil more techno-y than drum n bass.
ahh that female vocal at the end of the phone conversation killed my ears. kinda random too.
the kick drum seems to be conflicting with the bassline a bit after the second drop. i kinda doubt its these headphones.
i'm not sure if i like the structure of this that much, one too many lil drops.
its ok, but structure is kinda jerky, eq is off at times, and a couple of the sounds don't seem to fit with the rest.
5/10
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21-05-2005 03:45 |
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Rude
I'm gonna get you
Registration Date: 06-01-2005
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omg this is like... a really really stupid intro... Ever heard chinese pop-music?
lol it sucks, right? Your intro reminded me of that.
Now, As for the drums in the mid, drums could use more kick, bass is really, really low... too low I think. The style doesn't fit with the tune, it's like hardstyle drumnbass with some happy dumdumb tune...
structure: I dunno.. I don't really follow the rules in my tracks too...
bass: too low
drums: could use more kick
synths: kinda nice when they come in
ringin' telephone: weird
conversations: weird!!
rating: I dunno... I'd rate this.. a 6/10... dunno...
I'll just leave the ratings
greetz!
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21-05-2005 12:22 |
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k.c.walsh
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Registration Date: 26-01-2005
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Best tune I herd yet, Almost stumblin on Gyygantor with this master piece!!!! Lovn this trk!!!!***++++EQUIPED+){%!}]]]*******&^Fkn D&B son all the way )(:::::::
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22-05-2005 08:03 |
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personally i like the phone call bit, but that b line is to distorted and really screws the tune up!!!! loose all that distortion, if you played this out you would literally fuck the clubs speakers up.
its a good idea, fairly solid sound and the concept is reasonably original, the structure is ok as well.
but do us all a favour and re do the b line. i know you want it to be heavy, but........theres heavy and then theres messy. this is the latter.
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23-05-2005 02:21 |
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wreakon
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Registration Date: 05-10-2004
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23-05-2005 11:34 |
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sounds nice and distorted, might just be my head phones 
