anf0 D 
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Please check out my new track 'dark intensions' and post your comments here!!!
darkish dnb
software: orion pro, ablino 2, samples, waves comp, yamaha final masta
time spent: 3hrs
not fully completed, just after some comments on how its sounding already... if i should continue working it.
cheers
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20-05-2005 04:02 |
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ethex
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me likes the name of your track!
damn! 
needs more sub!! i would lose the crunchy sound!
3:43 bassline is weird needs variations..
and ofc only fx you have used is the grunchy sound 
fix that and 
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20-05-2005 20:43 |
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CubicSphere
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Dark Intentions
Definitely sounds dark!
THe hoover sounds god at 1.05 and again.
Tune needs more sub bass. I like the bassline, the wide steps, and the genreal wierdness. THe tune is abit repetative though, although it does have a wide variety of sounds in it. The 'ghostly' sound before the second drop is nice, maybe some more of that stuff.
It really gets going after the second drop. Bass line really does need more variation though. THere bass kicks sound a bit strange - like they arent quite in time.
Tune definitely has potential, I reckon you should build from the what you have after the second drop and vary the bassline a bit, probably by changing the melody. Overall there are enough sounds in the tune to make it happen, they just need shifting around a bit.
Not at all bad for only 3 hrs work though!
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22-05-2005 17:23 |
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Greyone
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intro : starts good ,drums sound raw but that's fine , ...
buildup : misses an upcoming snare (you know low volume to high )
drop: very technical ! some (dark) synths should be nice in it.
2nd drop : raw but nice alldough some synths are missing...
conclusion: got some fine tech/dark -step in it , finish it with mo sounds n fx , maybe some vocals... 
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22-05-2005 21:27 |
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dark intro, ray keith would like this, but it has kind of got that 98 dark soldier sound goin on. if ya gonna make ya beats like this give them a bit more variation.
its not bad, but theres no real power when it drops, the tune itself is ok, but the production need a little work, and maybe get hold of some fresher sounds. although the killa beez style noise is ok.
i hate to sound like a broken record, but check out reaktor, absynth, and the waves plug ins.
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23-05-2005 18:52 |
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anf0 D
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thanx guys for comments 
yeah you all pointed out what i thought, n some more, which is always good
lol i didnt get fully keen into this one for some reason.
but yeah ill check out those synths.
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24-05-2005 00:26 |
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S.O.T.A.
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whats up man? Your track sounds pretty nice in the begining. The synths are tight and so is the amen. The first sound could be a little rougher it seems kind of soft. The distorted subs are cool and so are the drum fills. The howling wind at the second drop is cool and I love those pause before the hit drops. It just needs some sound effects like a unghh or a yo every now and then. ANYWAY good stuff
DRUM AND BASS FOREVER!!!!
LATER 
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25-05-2005 19:47 |
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Surya
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Nice buildup in the intro. Sound is very thin though. Maybe use a different snare? It's quite harsh sounding.
The bass hits make it clear that your track is a bit overcompressed.
Drop: nice, but the thin sounding snares really bother me here.
Overall you have too little elements to keep it intresting...
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16-06-2005 09:09 |
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anf0 D
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yeah man... shouldnt of wasted your time with this one...
why not check dr satan
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