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spudleyq 
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Please check out my new track 'Deadly Ohmen (95%)' and post your comments here!!!
This is a tune I've been working on. It's not 100% completed, and this version has a shotty reece in it, I've already fixed it, and you'll be more pleased with the finished version once I put that up, I just thought you guys would like to hear what I've been up to.....seeing as how I haven't posted a track on here in ages.
Shout outs go to:
Me (For making it.) 
Surora (For listening to TONS of different versions.)
Rude (For being the crazy little man that he is.)
Surya (Not sure if you listened to it yet, but thanks for any kind of advice you may have tried to give me.) 
Everyone on this site!!
(Even you, Ultradark!)
Enjoy it!! Or else....
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Click on the pic above to visit my music profile on Myspace.
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19-05-2005 17:02 |
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Rude
I'm gonna get you
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haha not sure about the "little" though 
probably bigger then you lol
Sweet deadly ohmen track yea!! Makes me wanna stick my head in one of the subs lol
Fuck I just looooooove that pure subbass mmm mmm mmmmm!
luuuuv it ! Sweet breaks, sweet tune, SWEEEE-EEE-EEEEET BASS
sweet structure 
sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet track
10/10 for this mate!
Greetz, the crazy little man
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19-05-2005 18:02 |
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Greyone
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INTRO : good choice of sounds , hats sound well (sometimes very fast like that: tit tit tit tit trrrrrrrrrrr
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DROP: nice with all the Rave / synths !!! , nice break too ,
BASS: woooooooooow !! massive distorted and nice sounding , alldough the whole track could be (just a little) more compressed.
Congratulation 4 the FX man , shit they make this track one magnificant 
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19-05-2005 18:14 |
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Retroshift
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Registration Date: 31-10-2003
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Wow, this one 's topnotch.
Love this kind of electronic padsound at the intro, i hear a woodstick, very very nice scratchy sound, good work with the triggergating synth, works well with the mainsynth.
Cyclopanning starting from 2.15 ==> sweeeet
Hoover at 2.40 sounds very fat.
At 3.00, clangy trianglish? rides?: very good, gives extra dimension to your track
Keen tunage, good variation on drums. Melody keeps playing on in my mind after the song's finished.
Downside, didnt like the introhats, sequencing rox but the sound, could be 'thicker', dunno. U can drop the degrading hoover at 4.20 too, I think it doesnt fit there. It doesnt build up a climax (prolly not what u had in mind, but would be cooler to let things explode), the drop after it is a bit poor, (altho kickdrum sounds very neat).
I have the feeling this track is inspired a bit on B-comps-Amazon Rain, it reminds me a bit of it.
Yeah, its a lovely variation on all the bass/drum tracks that have been posted lately. I really love this trancy dnb, a nice melody on the synth and some kickass hoovers, those things make a big difference to get higher ratings on your track, the track should still stick in your head after its done. This is exactly what I had.
9.5/10 Big ups, never got bored whilst listening to it
This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Retroshift: 20-05-2005 12:26.
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20-05-2005 12:22 |
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k.c.walsh
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Nicley Done lovin that nasty analog synth at 3.24, nice samplin techniques. Your flowing with them ideas son. Curoius ass to what equipment you used. peace ++++++EQUIPPED+++++
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23-05-2005 10:04 |
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SARIN
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Massive tune, and the only thing I can say is that I'm not to fond of the intro hats (the arrangement of them), but when the break comes and the bass kickes in....DAMN, it surely ROCKS!!!!!
Keep up the good work,
SAR!N
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24-05-2005 09:41 |
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Muad'Dib
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Let's review.... hmm, the hats sound good, I like how they scratch my ear
The begining has a little strange atmo... That barking sound/vocal ROCKS! Could you please send it to me?
That trance synth in the background is also mature, and takes good place in the spectrum. Everything is clear till now. I guess this is a buildup 02:10...
Wow, that sound like some antique fast organ, which is also a bassline or sumthing.... and the bass is ok, though it has no huge power to it. Maybe you should add to lower freqs, dunno... the beat is ok, but try experimenting a bit more. I mean, those amen samples are overused
Ahh, you have an extra beat, but still those crashes are damn boring whenever I hear them ...
Good eq. And I can hear the compression striking... it is too hard, kills the dynamics, and maybe that's why the bass sound lacks power... Try adjusting the settings - cut attack time, cut sustain time. Amount to 1 - 1,5 values. GAIN to max +3 db.
And that would be all. Good atmo, a bit repetative tune in the latter part. How you plan to end it? IMHO, don't end it by fadin out or sumthing (I was argued by MUNKI C by this, but that was only an experiment). Instead EXPERIMENT!! Mwahahaha
Peace bro
8/10
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24-05-2005 13:02 |
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Nosrac
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Eary intro - very strange synth stuff but sounds really evil and cool especially when the vocal and the stuccato stuff kicks in. Like the synths, maybe a bit edgy for some- conflicting a bit. Filter is cool but almost too drastic. Good sounding drums but nothing out of the ordinary. The nasty bass at the drop is WICKED! love it! Drums could be maximized to match that HUGE bass. Great stalls (how the hell?? 
) Ah, then it goes back to the softer stuff - no problem though - makes the heavy stuff sound that much bigger when it comes back in at about 5:00 - great exagerated build! This has the elements of a great tune, just a few things that stand out right now - like the two edgy synths (hard to tell them apart - maybe pan or reverb one?) drums need a boost and filter sweeps could be a little more subtle - otherwise WICKED!
8/10
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MP3's: Acid Planet Page
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25-05-2005 04:00 |
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equipped
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Wow man your sample's, drumz, bass snd synth sound like an army! 2:40, 4:44 till end was fantastic. Love that sound quality. The only tip I can think of is that Kontact 2 is really good.**STU MAGGOO**
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26-05-2005 10:05 |
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weatherman
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Liking this tune alot. Nice programming and synth sounds.
Keep it up!
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01-06-2005 21:11 |
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Milis
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Registration Date: 05-09-2004
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Man..I've been playing this tune over and over again...
Its so surprising...never gets boring...
Can't keep still on this one..
10 for me
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02-06-2005 21:04 |
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anf0 D
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intro is cool. dont really like the hats in the intro.
synths are heaps cool indeed... vox sample with dely is sweet.
the mellow-d of the tune is nice n puts off a nice darkish vibe.
bass is really nice... rumbles nicely....
i think the drums could be abit more out there... and noticable, n crisp n clear.
nice use of filtering n shit.
good arrangment...
keep up the goodness.
8/10
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03-06-2005 04:24 |
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Surya
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Love how that pad builds up early in the intro!!!
Nice fx on the hats in the buildup!
Scratching is nice.
Not sure about the trance arp. Too trancey for me. As is the melody. Too pshycho trance like. Ah I see where it's going: pshycho trance DnB or something like that. Don't like that, but if that was your goal, I'd say you've achieved your goal!
Drop: quite nice, but the drums are a bit thin. Switch: heavy. Very nice, but I'm not sure it goes well with that psycho trance style we descided you were going for.
Nice edits too.
Bass is a bit too overpowering, turn it down just a bit.
Very well produced, but seems to me you couldn't choose which style you were making. I'd say: make thisone more strightforward pshycho trance and save the switches for some EI style track 
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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16-06-2005 08:59 |
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Nick ZZ
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28-10-2005 07:35 |
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f0re1gn
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Hmm, start sounds weird imo, too many hats? :o Nfi, something's just not quite right here.. Beats come in nicely. The voice (?) after 1:00 is weird
but good nonetheless. This tune makes me nod my head, props!! Bass could use some EQ'ing imo, but maybe it's just me. Otherwise the beats and everything fit very well alltogether! Ha! The fade-in on the second minute, GFG. Love the part after 3:00. Can't comment anything on it
Good beats there. Damn, i feel if i'd have a subwoofer this track'd be the shirt (; The long note at liek 4:40 is weird imo
The drop there is still super though. Where's the ending?
I heard something close to it, but hardly noticeable, lol.
This track is THE shit near the end, but not that good in the start. Yuo got very good buildups and fadeouts and shit, keep it up!
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28-10-2005 09:43 |
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Muad'Dib
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Your tune has excellent begining, it really develops a tension... and those barks... wow man...!! The quality of sound is great, everything is clear enough and the bass is juz like it should be.
And here is the buildup - great melodies and the sounds are juz amaizing... you have the quality! Respekt!
Going there...a little more... wow, the BASS!! MASSIVE!!!
Aggressive beat!! The snares are little quiet, cannot be heard good enough. The synths are great, you might have tried to change the main melody a little but is ok this way. Sometimes the ride hat cannot be heard - try boosting at 13 000 Hz for that. The compression ruins the whole image sometimes, but mostly it is good handled.
And no end!!! Damn!
9/10
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