Destroyed - SAR!N (New Update)

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Destroyed - SAR!N (New Update)

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SARIN

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A remake of an older tune named Destroyed, hope it's been worth it.
Dunno if it's still good enough for todays style, but let me know if it is or not.
Thx,

SAR!N

[Edit] new hihat in the beginning, filter over the lead comming up in the first break and a bit slower.

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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by SARIN: 18-05-2005 15:50.

18-05-2005 14:53

Darkside Darkside is a male

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nice atmos in the beginning, really good actually.
beat seems fine, but not quite hard enough during a few times when u dropped stuff out. that's only in the beginning tho. needs to be balanced out a lil better too (i.e. hi hats sound a lil too loud at times, when the snare should be the main point; its kinda hard to master this, i haven't)
good lead synth. maybe a little too loud tho.
not so much of a dynamic second beatdrop.
you add new sounds often, somethin that some people on this site seem to have trouble with.
rest of the song progresses with nothing radical, same vibe.
no extreme original idea in this i dont think, nothing that really makes me want to listen again, but it's not bad at all. nice flow to it. 6/10.

19-05-2005 02:27

SARIN

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Thx for the commentz...
Yeah maybe it wasn't a good idea to refresh an older tune, as it may sound a bit out dated and not to original, but the main idea behind this post was to see if it could still be worth palying nowadays.
And what you said about mastering...that is one of the hardest thingz there is...and I haven't mastered that yet either.
But I can't recall that many new sounds commin and going, nearly all you hear are there all the time...

SAR!N

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19-05-2005 04:27

Surora23 Surora23 is a male

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intro is hella cool...a lot of really good sounds in there...really liking it...beats are sick...love em...nice and techy big ups on taht one..

Really like the melodies of the lil synhts in the intro...

I like how you filter in your drums...the way you did it fit greatly with the rest of the atmosphere...drop...well i was expecting some hoove or reece...but waht you did was nice..was waiting for some kind of change...but it just kind of rolled thorugh iwth the same melody which wanst bad...it was nice...but couldve changed a bit...

second drop...nice gated synths...loved them....this tune deffinitely has my head rockin and my feet tapping...which takes a lot for me...so big ups on that...

really liked how the track just kind of flowed thorugh...was deffinitely a good listen...good job adding new sounds and stuff...

One thing that ive started taking to mind...after my last couple tracks is, something that one of the members of evol intent told spud, and he passed on to me...which is...its not about how many elements you have in a track...its about how much you can change them to keep something simple interesting...

if you take that into consideration and add, and change a few thigns in this track...itll be top notch...

great stuff...deffinitely loved the vibe coming form this track...good shit...

ill give you a 7/10

some minor level adjustments, like the gated synth...a little loud...but still nice...
and you could get some more change ups in there...especially in teh drums Big Grin

but again good stuff!

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19-05-2005 07:38

SARIN

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I must say that is a wicked feedback you just wrote there...
I know there should be more change ups in the beats and maybe in the synths...but it's not all that easy, cause the more i start playing with the tune, the more i want to change again.
So I will def take it in mind, and see if I can manage to make a few changes here and there.
Anyway thx again 4 your comments..

Cheers,

SAR!N

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19-05-2005 11:15

Surya

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Very decent tune again.

The sound could be a bit more 'in your face' imo, it all sounds a bit too much compressed now. Maybe redo the mastering?

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10-06-2005 08:44

D2o

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great sounds in the intro...very deep.....
beat is cool thin but still punchy (if you know what i mean?!?).....
synths in the intro are nice....good melodys.....
break is cool.....like the filtered drums before the drop....
nice tune my man sound a little old but still quite fresh.....
like the way it goes into the second break.....
like the staby/trancy synth.......
nice drop with the little bit of silence.....
like the little edit with the kick/synth in time....
then the bit that throws you off a bit....nice..... Bigup

.....i like that....

overall a very good tune
the mix is good all sound are clear and have their space
the only thing i would like to see a little different is maybe that the atmospheric pad should be thinned out when it drops or maybe leave it in for the first drop and take it out for the second drop make it a bit dryer and let that second synth part take center stage.......
but apart from that one thing, a very good tune indeed Bigup

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10-06-2005 10:25

SARIN

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Thx Jimmy C and Surya,

Well appreciated, and Surya if ya got any tips for the remastering...that would be great.

Cheers,

SAR!N

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14-06-2005 13:45

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