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Yawn 
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Please check out my new track 'Encounter (This Time Its War)' and post your comments here!!!
Kind of a short one this one, it spawned from Suryas insane snare challenge so if the snare is a bit in your face then you know why! Got lots of atmosphere & some nice dark sounds going on. Let me know what you think of the track & if I should make it in to a full length beast.
cheers!
This track has been deleted on the producer's request
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16-05-2005 22:06 |
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broadside
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yeah i like this man, more than most of the stuff I say I like. I'm a sucker for cool samples, and I really like the ones you got gong on here.
its pure build up, but even so it doesnt get too boring so you are definately onto something. Beast it I'd say.
I like the melody that comes it on 2:20. put a high monotone choir pad aaaaah behind it there, needs a bit more going on and that would really up teh drama. once it drops after that, i know its still building, but just complicate the rythym a little more, to give it the increassed urgency imo.
yeah finish it off man. look forward to hearing it if you do 
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16-05-2005 23:58 |
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Stutterstep
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nice track. dark and deep. drums sound good, good melody. sub is good but at the break you should change it up. The lead is cool. nice track
respect
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17-05-2005 05:46 |
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Yawn
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Yeah the idea was to give it a downtempo kinda feel, slow but menacing. The tempo of the project in logic is still 180bpm though & the kicks & snares are in their usual places....
I actually made this track in 3 days which a absolute record for me coz im usually a real slow burner when it comes to getting stuff that im happy enough with to post. The only thing I didnt do was limit it when I was mastering.
Cheers for the comments esp broadside
keep em coming!
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17-05-2005 16:58 |
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baz
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not a bad track at all 
but a little calm though you should try puttin a little mor kick an a little les distortion in your bassdrumz anyway keep doin it c ya
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"shotgun ; slammin in yo chestpiece ; blaw"
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17-05-2005 17:28 |
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cynik
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this track's got a cool, dark vibe to it, but not that present, er, well executed. I like the futuristic approach and the main theme
snare is not that strange except for the digitally sounding distortion and it's panned to the left ? taht is strange
pitchbending on the synth - go easy on it! too much, sounds a little silly
filtering (most present before the 2:40 drop) also is just too hard
sampled vox serve the purpose but the gun reloading must be louder, is that a shotgun? it should fuckin SCHYKL-KACKLICK out of the speakers
technically suffers - kik is most present and that growling in below isn't really enough - feels like it's just droning out of sense
in the end I love the theme, the mood, go foth with this and finish it!
ok, everything I said is IMO, if some mind or think it sounds like an "absolute truth".. it's just my not-so-good english
cheers
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17-05-2005 18:25 |
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Sykotic
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Wicked track. I like he voice samples, and whole creepy intro. "It's game time" <- that is your perfect chance for a super phat drop... but it doesn't happen. Add some more changes and stuff, cuz this is just like the intro to the real track...Sounds good though.
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18-05-2005 02:24 |
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Yawn
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Cheers for all the comments - Cynik thanks for the detailed review
Got some cool ideas & pointers now to hopefully get this finished up & sounding EVIL 
Peace
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06-06-2005 16:45 |
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Surya
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Very dark, quite nice drums, nice sweeps, but apart from that there's not much happening, is there? Good dark atmosphere, but try giving a bit more identity.
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- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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