 teknyne - they know i'm a boxer (ft mc sunny dahn)  |
teknyne 
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Please check out my new track 'they know i'm a boxer (ft mc sunny dahn)' and post your comments here!!!
This track has been deleted because a new version is available
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15-05-2005 20:42 |
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broadside
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listening . . . cool atmospheric intro. not sure emtirely about the thin top sounds, and maybe just too much reverb on the drums, but its cool nonetheless.
oh yes. love the switch there, techy sounds. playing this one LOUD, its nice. have abit more bass presence, and though the beats are nice and varied, you just keep waiting for it to drop.
and its all ready ending??! 
its not even a third finished, you need some sick drop though, just aftert where you have it stopping. very promising start though.
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15-05-2005 23:10 |
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teknyne
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cheers for feedback.
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16-05-2005 04:02 |
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Stutterstep
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nice intro, Theres a clip on one of your drum hits in the intro. I really like the intro. Not much of a drop. You need to work on the drums there very weak. You should blast it when it kicks in hard beat and heavy bass. then mabye switch it up for the second half. Nice track
Respect 
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16-05-2005 08:51 |
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Paki
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Ok listening...
Exelent introoo........ 
Awesome drums.... but there is slight clipping....
Dont like the leading synth it is somehow techno....
interesting vocals....
Some more variations in the synth like playing with the pitch or modlation....
Add some more agresive basseline and vary it with the synth....
The intstrument in the drums are ok ok exept the bassdrum...
Like the outro metalic sound at the end...
Needs more variations ...
So overall very good idea
I would rate it 7 from 10
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16-05-2005 14:08 |
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Rude
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erm... you haven't got any bass in there, just a reece but it needs dynamic boosting or something...
The vocals are a bit weird, drums are nice, homemade?
the melody is a bit repetitive after a while, the "woooohhh" sample is kinda lame... The hiphop parts: timestretching: weird effect, chop and rearrange your drums to avoid that if you don't want this.
Nice stuff for a first track, but it still needs work!
Riiiiiiiiiiiiiiiispekt !
greetz, rude
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16-05-2005 15:58 |
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teknyne
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thanks for feedback guys. unfortunately i cant go back to this tune. all ther files are deleted so i just got that mix of it. never reallly intended to do a massive ammount of work on it as it is a bit of a piss take. wot happaned is i was out dj'in and my mate mc sunny dahn said 'if anybody knows me they know im a boxer'. this phrase became a bit famous amongst my mates so i made a bit of a tune out of it. workin on new stuff now. will have something i a coupla weeks or so
respect peeps
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16-05-2005 16:48 |
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Sykotic
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Filtered beats at the intro are way cool. I like the way you throw the halfspeed beat for just a sec. MC sounds tight, need to work on getting a cleaner sound (unless you where going for that lo-fi sound on purpose). Again, I love the beats...
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17-05-2005 01:33 |
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Halph-Price
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boxer as a dog? there banned in ontario here. gotta be on a mussle for the rest born in the next 6 months. after that no more.
anyways.... the drums are kinda messed up but some of the cutting for the drums could be a bit cleaner, there's some clicks between there, need to cut when the wave get's to a ZERO-POINT. the variations and shit is nice, strech and pitch, all cool.
you should probably give it a bit of a high end boost, on the drums or synth, too spice it up there, since the vocals have a bit of a low-cut on them, you could boost the mid-high end of the synth, and crank the high end on the thoes drums.
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17-05-2005 06:28 |
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Surya
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Intro is quite cool.
Synth leads coming in. Quite catchy, but could use some straightening out.
Drop: drums don't do it for me. They're more like for dark step or something, and thats not what this is...
Also, where's the bassline?
Main theme has lots of potential, but the execution is lacking on multiple levels...
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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