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Paki 
Cool Steppa
Registration Date: 03-04-2005
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Please check out my new track 'Antena Talk (demo)' and post your comments here!!!
Ok so this track isn`t finished and it needs to be improoved. I`ve uploaded it just so see the comments about the idea and the style, so I will be finish it.... waiting for the reviews
This track has been deleted. Reason: Paki has been banned from the site for creating a second identity and trying to cheat the voting system.
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15-05-2005 12:23 |
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broadside
mentalist
Registration Date: 17-01-2005
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wicked start: i thought the bass was a car or lorry in the distance. its a good in my opinion, but i think you should bring it up a bit louder. the bass at 1:50 jars though - scrap that if i were you.
the beats are good, though they are loops.
but i personnally really like that low wavey bass from the start, and the little hoover type sound that mirrors it. i think this track has some intensity at time. definaetly keep working on it, bring that bass right up.
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15-05-2005 23:05 |
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Stutterstep
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Registration Date: 27-01-2005
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It sounds like your drum are in the back ground. You need to beef them up. bass is cool maybe switch it up and bit. good ideas, if think good drum would make this a better song Layer your kiks and snares use some compressionor distortion try it. I Like it
Respect
Stutterstep
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16-05-2005 08:57 |
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Sykotic
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Registration Date: 12-05-2005
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Intro reminds me of an angry sworm of insects...very cool. Kind of an industrial feel overall. Work on the bassline a bit-its more of a rumble than a bassline, but that can work.
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17-05-2005 01:35 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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This intro is what I call a non-intro. Try adding a real one.
The drumloop you use sounds very alive and punchy though. Just give it a bit more high-end.
The bass-end could use a boost.
The main synthline sounds very standard and unintresting though. It's just a stupid saw patch with a filter... Try finding something more intresting.
The vocal is overused too imo.
Some of the switches are nice, but overall the drums are too straight. Do some more edits!
The advice Stutter gives on the beats is quite intresting. Give it a shot!
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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02-06-2005 08:17 |
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Encypher
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Registration Date: 05-06-2005
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love it fucking wicked! reallyy like the rumble line i say rumble cos its not bass but i like tthatt itt works well with the rest, really like he bea but the intro needs soring sounds a bit off
Encypher
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Through meditation i program my heart to break beat and humm basslines in exhillation...
release
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08-06-2005 17:58 |
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PassDa J.
Sliced Slasher
Registration Date: 16-05-2005
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08-06-2005 21:27 |
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