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Surora23 
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Please check out my new track 'SixONESix (The Mark of Machines)' and post your comments here!!!
Its been awhile since if had any kind of inspiration, and lately ive finaly tapped into something usefull and this is what has been brought to life...
The main essential idea is the get an older techy feel, (around the 99-01) time and touch it up with a bit of my own style, etc...also giving it that touch of the half step breaks which seems to be something used by many producers nowadays...The track starts off techy, drops hard, and rolls on through...
Everything in teh track was programmed by myself (besdies a few of the presets i used)...But as far as drums and etc...All done by me....
I dont know how to put this track into words...its something ive worked hard on..and hopefully it pleases...enjoy...
Shouts go to:
MunkiC (for the sample pack...i used a lot of the sound effects in the pack)
Spud (for beta testing)
And big ups to darkside...(you hooked me up with some good ideas, and hooked me up with the vox..good shit bro...big up)
and thanks to everyone who takes a listen...cheers...enjoy...
(please rate/review)
This track has been deleted on the producer's request
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13-05-2005 23:16 |
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....and thanks to everyone who takes a listen...cheers...enjoy...
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you allready rated yourself (5 stars)!!
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13-05-2005 23:50 |
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Surora23
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....and thanks to everyone who takes a listen...cheers...enjoy...
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you allready rated yourself (5 stars)!! |
its for promo purposes...not to offend anyone...it doesnt necisarrily mean its 5/5 or 10/10...but people liek to see 10/10 track so more people will download...please/rate abd review...
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14-05-2005 00:58 |
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Yawn
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Originally posted by Surora23
....and thanks to everyone who takes a listen...cheers...enjoy...
(please rate/review)
its for promo purposes...not to offend anyone...it doesnt necisarrily mean its 5/5 or 10/10...but people liek to see 10/10 track so more people will download...please/rate abd review... |
your shouldnt really rate your own tracks man,that sucks, but itis a good track though!
Intro is cool defo a good for the dj's to mix with, seems to cut quite abruptly to the first break.
nice breakdown,but I think you need to make the bassline more prominent coz it doesnt really hit me with the impact I expected. Nice synth sounds over the top, it rolls quite nicely.
second breakdown is wicked it progresses nicely on from the first which is cool but I think it still needs more impact when it kicks in.
overall a cool track
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14-05-2005 01:30 |
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broadside
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Wow, I was browsing the forum, and I saw this track and I saw it had FIVE stars, so I thought,
oh
my
god
Im gonna HAVE to check this one out and review.
So it worked.
Right though this track is heavy, its produced to death. I really like the sub bass sounding nice on my speakers. Still though, you know the lead sound, its a bit wet if you know what i mean, not that its pussy, but its to high, not deep or wide enough imo. In my opinion also the vocals are to0 cheesy - yeah i know vocals are minor, but you wanna come out with something original, like from an audio book: but that computer game stuff is tooo generic.
Love the bit at around the 4:50s.
Overall, wouldn't give it 5 stars, but id stretch t oa four. its good. i think it lacks a catchy sinister melody though, its cool its atmospheric, but it lacks a certain "je ne sais quoi"
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14-05-2005 02:00 |
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Surora23
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14-05-2005 06:55 |
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Surora23
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Originally posted by ultradark
no i wont review and rate tunes from types like you, my opinion about types like you and their behaviour is expressed above, and not 60% of people here rate their own tracks, i actually didn't notice anybody except you and spudleyq doing that and i will remind you again if you will do that again and you have a few mod and 1 admin to contact whenever you like and you don't need to tell me who and why you will contact and this is no negativity from me but it is negativity from you rating yourself the highest possible mark to get more downloads and reviews leaving others with less downloads and reviews, this is not fair play from you, if you continue to do what you are doing everybody should rate themselves too like you to have equal chances of being downloaded and getting reviewies and if everybody would rate themsefves 5 stars after uploading their song it would be just ridiculous and it would destroy the voting system in some way, i hope the new improved voting system won't let uploaders to rate their own tracks. |
#1 id be wiolling to bet 60% of the people do rate themselves...and the rating system means nothing...it has no bearing on me...you could rate me a 1/10 and i wont give ashit...im nto worried if people like the track or not...but the more people who get it the better...
fair play? there is ntohing unfiar about it...and go ahead contact an admin...cause fortunately ive never done anything wrong...and if it was SOOOO BAD for you to rate yoruself....THEN IT WOULDNT BE AN OPTION ON YOUR OWN TRHEAD...so there is absolutely NOTHING stoping you or anyone else form doing it...
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14-05-2005 17:10 |
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Halph-Price
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no i wont review and rate tunes from types like you, my opinion about types like you and their behaviour is expressed above, and not 60% of people here rate their own tracks, i actually didn't notice anybody except you and spudleyq doing that and i will remind you again if you will do that again and you have a few mod and 1 admin to contact whenever you like and you don't need to tell me who and why you will contact and this is no negativity from me but it is negativity from you rating yourself the highest possible mark to get more downloads and reviews leaving others with less downloads and reviews, this is not fair play from you, if you continue to do what you are doing everybody should rate themselves too like you to have equal chances of being downloaded and getting reviewies and if everybody would rate themsefves 5 stars after uploading their song it would be just ridiculous and it would destroy the voting system in some way, i hope the new improved voting system won't let uploaders to rate their own tracks. |
it's one vote out of how many? i rate myself also.
most people only listen to good rated tracks. i submit on this site to get reviews. if giving myself a 5 star get's me a review, i do that.
in a fucked up and revesed way, people don't listen to low rated songs, who would need the reviews more, because the song isn't that good.
now that system doesn't really work, so blame who you want.
one person one vote, our society is based off the fact that we can waste our vote on anyone. do you think it's unfair for presidents to vote for themself? i hope the new government prevents that.
all in all who the fuck cares. you're a little man if that's what you're worried about, and i doubt anyone need's nor wants you're reviews, which are about as useful as a slap of cum across the face.
wiat WHY are you even reviewing anyone's songs, you're beats and basslines are so suprior to anything ever forged before, you're are above all of this mear mortalness. RUN OFF TO THE MOUNTINS OF OLYMPUS!!!! FAIR THEE WELL!!!
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Halph-Price: 14-05-2005 17:37.
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14-05-2005 17:28 |
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Surora23
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Originally posted by ultradark
and i think surora if you are promoting yourself you should be better sending cds to labels, party promoters etc. because they prefer to get cds, vinyl etc. instead of download your track, they don't surf the web to find you and download your track and even if you send them links they feel reluctant to actually download your track to listen to it. |
ok there isnt any disrespecting the voting system...i rate other people the way im suppose to...
second im not ready to send tracks out to labels...so as of now...i get as many people to hear them as possible...
And to be honest...the voting system has no future bearing on anyone on this site...do not think that if you have 5 stars a label is going to look at your track...cause liek you said...THEYRE NOT LOOKING FOR IT...so why get mad over something taht is completely minor and no one seems to really care about...people want other people to hear new, and good tunes...what better way to do it...get your priorities strait bro...
and why the hell are you so god damned pissed off at everything...you got a serious problem dude...
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14-05-2005 18:11 |
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Surya
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OK, that's been nice, now lets get back on topic 
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14-05-2005 18:19 |
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thefunke1
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well, whatever on the ratign system stuff, do whatever you want, or don't want. I don't want to get bogged down on nit picking, just hear to listen and review.
Always sold work Surora, intro is nice, good beat to mix with, great sub punch's before the drop, although break is a little long before the drop, may loose some of the audience. Drop hitting is very nice, pulls everything together, although a little dark for my taste.
Overall track is very nicely put together, break in the middle is nice, like the bongo work. Melody, sounds, and theme are carried very well throughout the track which gives it a very nice flow. Variations are not overdone, and just enough to keep the listener interested and bouncing along. Not to crazy about the beeping sample, although it fits with the tune, it gets a little irritating after a while.
Another nice production! 4/5
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14-05-2005 18:22 |
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wreakon
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nice tune.. very tech
snare could use some more punch
love that sweeping/pitching bass @ 1:32 dam thats fat! sample or synth??? i want it!!
reeces are very nice too
bongos in the breakdown sound a bit out of place.. its ok with the other drums
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15-05-2005 10:36 |
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Surora23
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nice tune.. very tech
snare could use some more punch
love that sweeping/pitching bass @ 1:32 dam thats fat! sample or synth??? i want it!!
reeces are very nice too
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the sweeping reece is a synth used in teh z3ta virus mod with a band pass filter, with a low and hi pass... thanks for the comments guys keep em comin...
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15-05-2005 17:04 |
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Surora23
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Originally posted by toneloc
you stink, so does your music |
ok thanks for the comment...that was super objective now wasnt it... i have grown so muhc from that comment...
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15-05-2005 18:24 |
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Surya
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Originally posted by toneloc
you stink, so does your music |
OK, if you don't have anything intelligent to say, please don't say anything. Reviews are supposed to be helpfull, yours isn't remotely...
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15-05-2005 19:39 |
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@1$-)
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you stink, so does your music |
OK, if you don't have anything intelligent to say, please don't say anything. Reviews are supposed to be helpfull, yours isn't remotely... |
yes mr toneloc seems like another one of those doa posse, i remember what happened to the last one (he now sleeps with the fishes!!!lol)
anyway the tunes not bad, my only real issue is the beats, very rigid. i like dnb to have more swing to it. but i guess thats personal taste.
and as for the rating your own tunes........well youve got a point in that if its got a high score then more people will download it, but it does kind of defeat the point of the site.........no??
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16-05-2005 15:37 |
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Rude
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Originally posted by toneloc
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I really hope I get the chance of reviewing one of your songs!
Now for the review: Surora, I told you already what I tought about it when it was still in construction. Now, ... need to listen to it again cuz I forgot how it goes...
oyea, tight drums, atmospheric bassy intro, I like the kick you used there hmhm... Don't like the synths there, although they fit in the song...
muhuahahaha weapon-system-samples!!! love 'm 
nice drop! ... by the way, what VSTi's do you use??? 
where do you get these samples?
what I liked:
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tight stuff
- almost everything
what I disliked:
- the bad comment you got
- synth-sounds
keep on rockin' mate, you're doin' great!
greetz
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16-05-2005 18:27 |
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cynik
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what a cool track name
Surora23, youre going way over your head with the production.
I mean, everything sounds in place just too much, cos I can't hear the main idea here, like something is missing
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drums fuckin rock, as usual
drop 2:05 bassline imo is too weak to support the track. unoriginal too
like you said, no inspiration
bongas don't work with the hi-tech vocals imo in the slow part and collide with the squeaky synth
overall: production-wise nothing to comply but no idea found
a 6/10
but, keep it up, inspiration will come!
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16-05-2005 18:42 |
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Halph-Price
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i like the female samples,a dn the 303-ish synth is really sick sounding...
the beep is a perfect sci-fi effects... someone actually said you produce to well....
i dunno, it does start off a lot slow. the clicking and hissing shit rocks.... all the little vocals are cool, maybe pan her a bit, and play wtih the panning for all the clicks too give it more of a feeling of shit going on all around... other than that, it's going on... maybe drive that bass deeper...
maybe have some little cheery noise or that, or cut all sound when she says the post is destroyed. play with the stero image there a bit..
add some sound effects to support that sometihngs uner attack to help build up to that, sierns would be suggested here, you got some going on but ya need liek the BIIIIIIIIIIG LONG WWWWWWWWWWWOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRAAAAARRRRRRRAAAAAAAAAAA kinda, FM synth style build up for that second drop, defiantly. ...
and again you can just drop everything and have here say that, and go back to the song, add an impact and even have a reason to drop the beats... you got everything else there for a good soundscape and a great song like usual.
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