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Registration Date: 01-04-2005
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Please check out my new track 'Untitled' and post your comments here!!!
track numero tres, the "best one" I made till now
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17/03 : Somewhere in Borgerhout...
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13-05-2005 20:34 |
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thefunke1
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Registration Date: 09-12-2004
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Tune has a housy beat to it rather than DnB, kind of like house speeded up. Not to crazy about the synth sound used. Bass level needs to be adjusted as it's a little overpowering, as well snare is lost in the background. The meldoy needs a little variation in there.
As I listen to house or Trance, I had to learn the DnB beat rather than the house, takes a little time, although once you get it then your rolling, but I'm still learning.
In the tune you should go over it once complete as a lot of the levels are overpowering other sounds.
Other members are far more advanced than myself and could offer better advice in that area.
thanks for the listen!
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14-05-2005 18:28 |
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Paki 
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Registration Date: 03-04-2005
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Ok interesting sawtooth
hard kick but very soft snares ...
The hihats are ok...
And about the style ...
this more like hard house and techno style rather than DnB...
But interesting panning.... on the drums...
Add some variations with sawtooth synth... and add some basseline....
Do the Eq staff of the drums properlly some more bass on it`s eq and less treble...
The overall compression is ok
It is all the same some more variations needs to be added...
Overall I like the track interesting idea.... HARD and HARSH... 
But at 4: 32 don`t like the trancy style of synth...
Overall I would rate it 6 from 10
Keep it up 
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16-05-2005 14:17 |
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Stutterstep
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Registration Date: 27-01-2005
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interesting. i'm not sure what to think. the first 20sec were cool. but this is pretty crazy. Your levels are good. needs a lot more to it. nice
respect
stutterstep 
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17-05-2005 06:50 |
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Surya
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Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Intro: the 909 toms sound very housey. As does the kick
Oh, housey 4 on the floor kicks... Hmmm. Not feeling that, especially since there is no snare. How can you make DnB without a snare?
Anyway, the drumrolls are cool, but need a boost.
New bassline coming in: sounds very digital and the melody isn't very impressive.
Aw, those kickrolls are too loud!
Your basslines lack bass, thats for sure, so add bass and a sub!
The track gets boring quite fast too. You've got the same stuff all over, and over, and over...
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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