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illuminati
Cool Producer
Registration Date: 21-01-2004
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Please check out my new track 'Alienopticus (amen version)' and post your comments here!!!
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12-05-2005 15:06 |
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Nosrac 
Bag of Hammers
Registration Date: 15-12-2004
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Nice intro - drums at the drop are mixed perfectly - is that a break, because if not you've got a really sweet spread to that kit - sounds powerful yet natural. Synths are big without interfering with drums. The amen cuts are deadly! Used conservatively but dead on. The strings at about 3:15 are a bit loud. Love the churning sounds percolating in the background throughout. Wicked bassline at about 3:20 onwards. Track sounds really slick and well produced. Again the spread on the drums - especially the snare is perfect. If that is a single snare hit sample I would gladly trade some of my best kept hits for it 
. PM me - let me know. Ah man, it all comes together at the drop at 5:35 
Nice job bro!!
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MP3's: Acid Planet Page
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13-05-2005 04:25 |
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maz
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Registration Date: 23-04-2005
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Good work.
Your track is very homogeneous.
I found it little beat long, and i personnaly don't like too much synthé.
But you have made a good work.
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Listen Maz compos on http://yann.bahler.club.fr
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13-05-2005 14:36 |
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Surora23
Agressive Melodic Disorder
Registration Date: 05-07-2004
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now ive been skeptical about these ratings cause of all the newbies so im gonna be objective as possible with no bullshit...
here it goes...
intro...nice...acidy creeppy....drum roll in...nice....but your breaks have zero hi end and sound really mudded...amens as well...but melody is flowing along nicely...the break down is cool....the drop i think lacks some power...ad some more dynamics in there...at arround 3 mins or so you ad the amens...nice touch i liked that...rest of the t4rackl flows through...nice long epic listener...cool stuff...
Good: Great idea...loved the melodies and the over all flow...not osmething to be playted out, but a great song to sit and listen 2...
bad: i had a few beefs with this one...mainly on tghe production
first off it sounds like you rendered this prety qietly? maybe im the first persont to notice this but its a pretty quiet song...
Second was the eq's on teh over all track and teh drum... theyre lacking punch and hi end... boost it about 1-2 db at 90-110hz , boost the snares at 500hz and the hi end about 1-2 db at 16khz... This will liven up those drums...everything else seemed bfine, but with the mudded drums everything else seemed out of palce...
other than that i think it was a tad too long...but still a good listen...if i were to rate this, id give it a 6/10...good stuff, but needs some worj for sure...
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Rinse it OUT!!!!
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13-05-2005 17:04 |
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baz
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Registration Date: 19-02-2005
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i don't even know what to say 
love the track it's awesome...love the spacey tune as well as the fat
bassline nice drums yup nice track for sure.
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"shotgun ; slammin in yo chestpiece ; blaw"
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18-05-2005 17:04 |
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Politix
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Registration Date: 24-05-2005
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The track starts off funky but still dark. I also like the way you fed in the bass and the drums(reminds me of hand grenade by twisted). There are a few things that could be better about the beat(in my opinion);
-Stronger hihat
-A tad more pop in the kick
The first drop out is nice. I really like the effects and the second bass is nice but the drop could have been developped more. I thought that if you put more complex hihat work in it like an open and a washy one interacting it would have ruled.
the bass at +- 3: 15 is cool and without out it the song would have started to become repetitive. During this loop, the kick sounds better but the hihat is still not load enough.
At 4.44, the wierd sound really add to the ambiance but you could have dispenced with the hihat(cos its present in all the previous mellow sections)
at 7: 40, the bass is really nice. but I think the synths came in to fast.
Overall, the synth is sometimes a bit too present but generally, it works well for me. The song has a nice dark feel to it and has although could have been shorter, wasn't too long.
Nice one
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26-05-2005 16:57 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Nice theme, nice sounds.
String is a bit too loud imo.
Nice drums too
Same goes for the bassline, but it could use a boost
Trancey yet funky, quite original, your style. Not completely my taste, but nicely done!
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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06-06-2005 07:55 |
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