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Registration Date: 20-05-2004
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Please check out my new track 'Infinitum - border remix' and post your comments here!!!
This is my entry for the remix ad infinitum project.
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11-05-2005 21:25 |
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Surya
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At last
__ "In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004

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11-05-2005 21:36 |
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Sorry 'bout that
but it was a bit unclear from the start when I could start lol
and since we were unable to upload tracks the last few weeks, that delayed it a bit too
But mostly it's because I'm really busy in school (the whole year already)
so actually it's the first track I've been working on (this school year)
It's actually still a work in progress, but it took already enough time as it is so...
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11-05-2005 21:59 |
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Surya
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OK, ok, ok, ok
__ "In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004

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12-05-2005 07:31 |
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D-Lux
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Hmmmzzz... Didn´t knew u where working on a tune :-D
bout the tune:
not feeling these drums at all ... actually "I hate them"
The bassline synth sounds nice tho . nice lining thru
the synth stabs ... not feeling it either :-S
Nice meldoy in the track tho (gotta stay positive :-D)
Better luck next time ;-)
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12-05-2005 09:15 |
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Paki
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uhhhh... I dont like the bongoas...
The snares are too quiet....
Interesting baseline....
Nice delay on the synths...
The panning could come more in the front....
Very good Hi Hats....
Like the variations of the baseline but its somehow overloaded ( or maybe too much of Bass Melt in distorsion) so I suggest to lower the volume of the baseline ... It will come in the front at the mastering an EQ...
The drums would be more noticable like that( use compresion 2:1 ratio, 10-50ms atack, 100-300 ms release) I think... but not sure...
Add some more variations it is somehow dull...
Overall nice idea
I would give it 6.5 from 10
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12-05-2005 12:23 |
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Surya
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Drums aren't badly programmed, but the snares could surely use some layering. Now they sound like one of them lame preset drumkits. Layer with some more punchy and snappy snares!
Bassline is done nicely with the automated filter.
The plucked string sounds a bit standard too, doesn't make much impression on me.
Buildup in the breakdown takes a bit too long but not bad.
Drop: Nice with the extra layer of drums, but it sounds a bit too thin to make impact.
Seems to me you focussed hard on the bassline, and that turned out fine, but the rest could use more work.
__ "In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004

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06-06-2005 07:50 |
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