janverstichel 
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Registration Date: 10-11-2004
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Please check out my new track 'Metro' and post your comments here!!!
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08-05-2005 19:57 |
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Jeller
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Registration Date: 11-11-2004
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very good job man
4.5/5
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08-05-2005 21:08 |
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marine289
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Registration Date: 05-10-2004
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Interesting intro, pretty atmospheric. Drums coming in: they need a boost.
And the snare needs some EQ as well, or layer it with another snare.
Vocal sample is nice, but also needs to be a bit louder.
When the bassline drops there's this fast hihats, but I think they are messing up the drums a bit 
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Bassline is pretty nice, although it could need some variation. Maybe some more variation in the sound will do...
Actually this track was very good untill the bass dropped in...
Maybe this type of bass just doesnt really fit the track.
Outro is pretty short...
Overall pretty good, you are making good progress, but the bass kind of ruis the track for me. 3/5
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08-05-2005 22:06 |
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kareem
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Nice atmosphere, fun lil' background drums.
Nice bass but do agree with marine that it sounds lil' empty.
Nice fast beats 
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Got some cool drops in this song.
Like the snare but could be louder.
4/5
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08-05-2005 22:46 |
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Greyone
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Registration Date: 01-04-2005
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good quality intro but i'm missing a buildup , drop is nice . hats could use different velocity , drums are kinda missing some of those Rides from Fruity (maybe instead of fast hats) bassline is nice.
Lots of variation 'n effex makes it allright. 
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09-05-2005 17:56 |
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Jeller
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the only thing i don't like in this tracks is that there is sometimes too muhc confusion and the hihats are a bit too fast at some points
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10-05-2005 16:12 |
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Nosrac
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Very complicated and tight intro - tons of great panning - drop is not apparent, maybe a bit awekward - oh wait it drops later at 1:15. There are some heavy bass drums just before that which could work if they were turned down and continued throughout - they stick out too much. Lots of work went into this one tight change ups like at 2:15 and the evol variation just after are awesome, but they get lost in the shuffle - track needs to focus on a theme. Some really big nice atmos. sounds that sit nicely back in the mix. I think this track would sound much heavier if you changed the really hi, hissy hats - for something a bit chunkier and add another layer to the snare. There's some glimpses of pure genius in this one and you clearly have a vicious dark side to your production that's ready, but doesn't quite jump out of this track. Huge improvement - In two or three more tracks you'll be killing shit for sure bro.
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11-05-2005 03:33 |
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janverstichel
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thx man 
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11-05-2005 16:31 |
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Paki
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Registration Date: 03-04-2005
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Very good effort men...
Love the basdrums and the snares....
Exelent bassline ...
Very good mastering...
Interesting variations smooth passes among the patterns....
The song is rolling...
I would rate it 8.5 from 10
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12-05-2005 12:41 |
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Verry nice beats...
The beginnig is superb.
It' opening a way into imagination.
Nice fast beats giving us the rules of the song.
Keep the fast beats and make the smooth passes even better.
Very nice
4.5/5
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16-05-2005 19:07 |
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T.O.R.
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Registration Date: 17-11-2004
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Damn, very nice...
Good work, big up!
4,5/5
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19-05-2005 22:43 |
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Surya
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Not bad tune. Not fond of your snare though, chould use a bit more punch
Some nice switches
Hats are a bit too loud though
Quite good jump up style...
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- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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