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hedset
Producer
Registration Date: 23-06-2004
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Please check out my new track 'khemikal ' and post your comments here!!!
hi everyone, this my new track from an old one i made a while back with analogue equipment, but now that computer music programs came a long way, i tuned it up and all of that, definitely listen and enjoy
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08-05-2005 08:39 |
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cynik 
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Registration Date: 15-03-2005
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industrail sounds - bombs falling down in intro is way too long
ahh, the song starts in 1:37 ?? I don't get it
very, very blatant this whole is with that amen (is it?) and no song structure, sounds like an intro all the way to 3:35 when the bassline starts
for the b/line it's a sample which gets eaten, literally with that amen
btw that little drum part in 3:16 is very cool
since this is not a complete track my review is somewhat element-oriented
so, dunno, maybe with more work this may become a cool track, this way it just aint working
peace
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08-05-2005 15:39 |
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Greyone
Master Producer
Registration Date: 01-04-2005
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there's too much experimented in the intro ( too much bombs , ...) Drop ain't that interesting , but those drums are verry nice (Sample I guess 
) alldough there ain't much variation in it .
Big fan of that synth (3:35) but that 2nd drop could be more phat .
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08-05-2005 16:54 |
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S.O.T.A.
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Registration Date: 13-05-2005
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hi there I'm S.O.T.A. just a few suggestions about your track-It starts out very promising with all the dark atmosphere. It seems to go too long and I'm not really a fan of tracks that don't have any sort of rythm in th intro. It is kind of alarming how the drums come in it' almost confusing at first I thought the liquid bass line was the track but then you do the dark bass and it sounds very nice. Is that the second drop? Why don't you play some of the sounds rom the begining. Well cool track anyway
LATER
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17-05-2005 07:59 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Apocalyptic intro 
Goes on for a bit too long though...
Amens kick in quite abruptly. They sound a bit thin and lack punch. They're very straight, add more variations. Try making that drop more dramatic...
Again it goes on for a bit too long, gets repetetive fast.
Bassline kicking in: quite cool but could use a boost in the low end.
Again the ames sound too thin and simple. Layer!!!
Again it goes on for a bit too long, gets repetetive fast yet at the end of the track, it sounded like it was too short, due to the bassline coming in so late...
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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