Soi 
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Crank up those drumlevels,
Maybe you should try defining clearly seperated parts in your track, when i push the play-button, it seemed like it incessantly kept on going till the end without any 'real' changes whether it be a breakdown+drop, or more smt like the traditional chorus/verse distinction.
Lots of bass going on, maybe a bit too much, cut down some vital frequencies and boost others.
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08-05-2005 12:30 |
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well this stated promising, good atmos.....its just the beat, not really rockin enuff for my taste. should be louder in the mix, cant really hear the kik, dont like your choice of snare.
the first drop at 2.16 just doesnt slam in enough, try a bit more light n shade.
some of the breakdowns are alright later on, sounds like youve tried to over complicate it though.
needs work.
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08-05-2005 23:21 |
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anf0 D
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dark twisted n strange...
not much to save that hasnt been said.
drums need to beat hammering, n this would be some cool dark shit
6.5/10
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09-05-2005 09:57 |
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cynik
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thanx for the response, yeh it does need more work, not a lot time spent with this, maybe 8-10 hours over a couple of weeks. my mates liked it more than I did lol
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09-05-2005 11:09 |
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Greyone
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yes it is dark 
and those synths are nice cutted ,
drum could be filled up ( kick could use a boost and ghost snare's should be more agressive)
anyway it's a nice psycho-dark track and i enjoyed listening to it... 
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09-05-2005 18:19 |
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Nosrac
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Intro sounds like a swarm of locusts - cool. The "hiss" snare in the intro needs a "crack" layer to it. The spastic synths at 1:28 have the right idea, but may need some quantizing. This build-up is mental - right on! And when the swarm of locus changes to a bubbling cauldrun - very cool - goes great with the stuccato synth stabs (something Soi and T. Roll have mastered in their tracks). A major problem is that a new powerful drum line with a new bd/snare and hats should drop right at 2:16 though - and going back and forth between that pounding step beat and the fragmented intro beat (and altering the swarm for the cauldrun accordingly) could be the theme to the track. Some unique and powerful sounds in this one, but it needs some attention to detail with regards to quantizing/accents and mixing. Finish this one - it has the foundations of a really dope track.
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11-05-2005 03:43 |
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Sykotic
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Cool track with a lot going on... 2nd bass sound could be a little more pronounced, along with dropping the 1st bass sound out at some point. I'm a little unsure about the crowd sounds, a little distracting. Odd time beat/syth lead at about 1:30 to 2 mins in threw me off balance at first, but it pulled back together.
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12-05-2005 23:28 |
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Surya
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Originally posted by cynik
it's a dark but agressive track |
I feel the darkness, but not the agressiveness...
The drums are nice, but they could use more oempf 
And a small boost.
Atmo is a bit too loud imo.
Acually this is more of an experimental track than real DnB, no?
Some cool stuff, but it lacks power imo. And a decent full blown bassline...
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17-05-2005 07:53 |
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cynik
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Originally posted by Surya
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Originally posted by cynik
it's a dark but agressive track |
I feel the darkness, but not the agressiveness... |
it was agressive while working on it, but I guess it was lost somewhere.. damn
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Originally posted by Surya
The drums are nice, but they could use more oempf
And a small boost.
Atmo is a bit too loud imo.
Acually this is more of an experimental track than real DnB, no?
Some cool stuff, but it lacks power imo. And a decent full blown bassline... |
fnaly someone noticed it's experimental!
I mean, from the start it was ment to be like that, with no classic bassline or such to put it in some specific genre..
thanks for the reviews everyone
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17-05-2005 09:35 |
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Nick ZZ
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