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Friscko 
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Please check out my new track 'War Regalia' and post your comments here!!!
Used some samples from the Ravesounds and choirs samplepacks by Surya, but beats and melodies are selfmade.
This track has been deleted because a new version is available
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07-05-2005 04:03 |
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Darkside
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this tune has the honor of being the first to recieve a review from me since the uploading feature was fixed! 
ravesound sounds a little bit dry. beat is ok. needs more variation or something tho. hmm the new choir melody you put in is sorta weird, but alright i guess. bassline is pretty good. this song doesn't seem to have enough variation overall, so it gets really boring. u don't introduce many new sounds along the way. the sound quality also seems to be really flat, but you'll get the hang of that in time. i dont think any sounds really override others, so the levels r ok. there are a few alright ideas in this, if you could keep the track a lot more interesting then it would be worth more of a listen. 5/10
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07-05-2005 04:54 |
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stickbubbly
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cool track.
i think the beat needs to switch up some more.
levels are ok, at some parts your drums sound too loud. or lead is too low.
could use more sub
i love the choices in sounds
the flow of the track is pretty cool.
i like the skippy drum beat. it sound nice and clean.
nice one.
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07-05-2005 15:09 |
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Nouveau_Riche
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In general I think the track is pretty solid.
The only thing that bothered me once in a while was the melody overlapping the rave sounds and not really working well together.
Drums are nice, but could use a little variation here and there.
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07-05-2005 17:27 |
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Friscko
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Originally posted by Nouveau_Riche
The only thing that bothered me once in a while was the melody overlapping the rave sounds and not really working well together.
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is that the part after the drops, or the other...
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07-05-2005 19:35 |
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Friscko
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08-05-2005 01:37 |
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Darkside
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he must be. there's definitely some bass.
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08-05-2005 02:16 |
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Soi
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It's a nice first track i hear of you.
There's a slight truth to the issue whether you exxagerated on the raves or not.
Your drumpattern is nice, but it could use some 'glue' to make it coherent and all, some cymbals, dunno.
The snare could use some snappy punch sound as well, it should go 'TAK' instead of 'bok' imo.
It strikes me that with very little ingredients (drums, bass, raves, and airy vocals) you accomplish a nice result.
Keep it going.
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08-05-2005 12:46 |
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Rude
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your drums are alright, but the rest is too quiet! bring these sounds more up front. Your rave sounds... man... Don't like 'm at all... Toadking was good but this.. Gets boring quite fast... and that weird rave-line you use in the intro, drop it, doesn't sound good at all 
now... You got enough ravesounds in it, but I'm sure you can do something with vocals. Invite a few friends and start recording !
structure 
2.5/5
drums 
3/5 (nice selection, but you need to change the pattern once in a while, for more variation)
bass:
1.5/5 you only use bassreeces, try VST-shit
overal rating... 5.5/10
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09-05-2005 17:27 |
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teknyne
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like the hardcore style synth bit nice. bigger bass would b nice
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12-05-2005 22:18 |
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Sykotic
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Interesting track using alot of old hardcore type sounds. Sounds like the drum tracks are self produced. Maybe just a tad more crack to the snare is needed. I like the bass sounds. Try do do a little more with the drum tracks; subtle changes every few measures
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13-05-2005 20:56 |
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Friscko
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13-05-2005 21:37 |
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Surya
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Nice choir in the intro
Ah, you used that rave sequence in whole... not very inventive, is it? 
Drums: not bad, but hats sound a bit dry and the snare could use some layering imo.
Reece coming in... and choir stabs... Quite cool acually. Put some reverb on them choirs
The intro ravesounds cut away too abruptly
Drop: choir works fine with the drums, but the drums lack power. And where's the bassline? You can't hear it in the mix as it is. Give it a boost.
Ah, part with only the reece and the drums. Here you do hear the reece... strange...
Nice idea, but it sounds very empty overall, and you have too little elements to keep it intresting imo...
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14-05-2005 19:10 |
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and it's not what i call wasting time 