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Friscko Friscko is a male
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Please check out my new track 'War Regalia' and post your comments here!!!

Used some samples from the Ravesounds and choirs samplepacks by Surya, but beats and melodies are selfmade.




This track has been deleted because a new version is available

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07-05-2005 04:03 Homepage of Friscko
Darkside Darkside is a male
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this tune has the honor of being the first to recieve a review from me since the uploading feature was fixed! Big Grin

ravesound sounds a little bit dry. beat is ok. needs more variation or something tho. hmm the new choir melody you put in is sorta weird, but alright i guess. bassline is pretty good. this song doesn't seem to have enough variation overall, so it gets really boring. u don't introduce many new sounds along the way. the sound quality also seems to be really flat, but you'll get the hang of that in time. i dont think any sounds really override others, so the levels r ok. there are a few alright ideas in this, if you could keep the track a lot more interesting then it would be worth more of a listen. 5/10
07-05-2005 04:54
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cool track.
i think the beat needs to switch up some more.
levels are ok, at some parts your drums sound too loud. or lead is too low.
could use more sub
i love the choices in sounds
the flow of the track is pretty cool.
i like the skippy drum beat. it sound nice and clean.

nice one.
07-05-2005 15:09
Nouveau_Riche Nouveau_Riche is a male
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In general I think the track is pretty solid.
The only thing that bothered me once in a while was the melody overlapping the rave sounds and not really working well together.

Drums are nice, but could use a little variation here and there.
07-05-2005 17:27 Homepage of Nouveau_Riche
Friscko Friscko is a male
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quote:
Originally posted by Nouveau_Riche
The only thing that bothered me once in a while was the melody overlapping the rave sounds and not really working well together.

is that the part after the drops, or the other...

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07-05-2005 19:35 Homepage of Friscko
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Ehhh what's this? the parts where the melody overlapped the rave sounds bothered me too... And yea well... not sure about that skippy beat....
It's clean yea but it still needs work.
here's the review:

what I liked:
-selection of bassdrums and snares
-that sphere in your intro

what I disliked:
-overlapping melody
-ravesounds Puke
-the rest!

I'd give you
2/5 structure
2/5 drums
0.5/5 melody
0/5 bass (no bass)
3/5 sound

Overall: 1.5/5 or maybe 2/5 for the time you wasted

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08-05-2005 00:26
Friscko Friscko is a male
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quote:
Originally posted by drumJoyce
0/5 bass (no bass)

you listened to it on laptops speakers or what!?

Mad and it's not what i call wasting time Mad

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08-05-2005 01:37 Homepage of Friscko
Darkside Darkside is a male
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he must be. there's definitely some bass.
08-05-2005 02:16
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It's a nice first track i hear of you.
There's a slight truth to the issue whether you exxagerated on the raves or not.
Your drumpattern is nice, but it could use some 'glue' to make it coherent and all, some cymbals, dunno.
The snare could use some snappy punch sound as well, it should go 'TAK' instead of 'bok' imo.
It strikes me that with very little ingredients (drums, bass, raves, and airy vocals) you accomplish a nice result.
Keep it going.
Bigup

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08-05-2005 12:46 Homepage of Soi
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your drums are alright, but the rest is too quiet! bring these sounds more up front. Your rave sounds... man... Don't like 'm at all... Toadking was good but this.. Gets boring quite fast... and that weird rave-line you use in the intro, drop it, doesn't sound good at all Frown
now... You got enough ravesounds in it, but I'm sure you can do something with vocals. Invite a few friends and start recording !

structure Roll Eyes 2.5/5
drums Pleased 3/5 (nice selection, but you need to change the pattern once in a while, for more variation)
bass: Roll Eyes 1.5/5 you only use bassreeces, try VST-shit

overal rating... 5.5/10

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09-05-2005 17:27 Homepage of Rude
teknyne teknyne is a male
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like the hardcore style synth bit nice. bigger bass would b nice

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12-05-2005 22:18
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Interesting track using alot of old hardcore type sounds. Sounds like the drum tracks are self produced. Maybe just a tad more crack to the snare is needed. I like the bass sounds. Try do do a little more with the drum tracks; subtle changes every few measures

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13-05-2005 20:56
Friscko Friscko is a male
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quote:
Originally posted by Sykotic
Sounds like the drum tracks are self produced.

indeed they are, dont use amens and so one anymore

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13-05-2005 21:37 Homepage of Friscko
Surya Surya is a male
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Nice choir in the intro

Ah, you used that rave sequence in whole... not very inventive, is it? Wink

Drums: not bad, but hats sound a bit dry and the snare could use some layering imo.

Reece coming in... and choir stabs... Quite cool acually. Put some reverb on them choirs Wink

The intro ravesounds cut away too abruptly

Drop: choir works fine with the drums, but the drums lack power. And where's the bassline? You can't hear it in the mix as it is. Give it a boost.

Ah, part with only the reece and the drums. Here you do hear the reece... strange...

Nice idea, but it sounds very empty overall, and you have too little elements to keep it intresting imo...

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14-05-2005 19:10 Homepage of Surya
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