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Rude 
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Please check out my new track 'Android (homemade breaks)(99% finished)' and post your comments here!!!
Erm yes, well... I made drumloops and I used them in this track.
It still needs a bit of work, but it sounds good already
Enjoy
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06-05-2005 20:09 |
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Soi
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Nice samples, very renegade hardware stylee anno 1995
Drums are WAAY too quiet, cranck it up and put everything else down.
Don't like the saw-bass at all, please pick another waveform or sample, you do knwo that we have lot's of cool bass-sounds on this site, no? Check'em, i know you're gonna like em
Song could be nice, but work on your sounds/samples.
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08-05-2005 14:01 |
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Yawn
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The break is good & I like your drum sounds (the snare in particular) but overall the drums are to quiet.
I like the vocal sample but use a bit less I think. You need to introduce more elements throughout out the track coz I dont think drums, bass & vocal is enough to keep it interesting for the duration.
Not really 100% keen on the bass sound, needs more variation & could probably be a bit more gritty. That would give the track some edge to it.
Do a bit more work on it & you could make a really good track.
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08-05-2005 14:18 |
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cynik
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good intro, that buildup really is energizing 
Heres what I would do with this:
-boost the drums and maybe distort them a little
-play the bassline with a few more different bass sounds and flter them
-add a subbass
-timestretch the vocal samples here and there, make a break out of that
-MAYBE add a "real" instrument such as a silly trumpet or whatever
and this could be a really good track 
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08-05-2005 14:27 |
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Rude
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alrighty thanks for the feedback !
but no silly trumpets
I'll be workin' on it as soon as I finished my new track
which is about finished... but it still needs alot of work
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08-05-2005 16:41 |
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Nouveau_Riche
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Here are a couple of comments:
- I don't mean to be rude, but that bassline just really really annoys me. It sounds like the soundtrack of an arcade game.
- Drums sounds nice, but they need a lot more power and volume.
- I like the vocals, but I think you used them a little too often. Try adding some other elements instead.
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08-05-2005 16:56 |
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Rude
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Everybody here is soooo nice
nobody wants to be rude...
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08-05-2005 17:05 |
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@1$-)
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lol. check your other tune for the review of this one
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09-05-2005 18:52 |
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Rude
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Originally posted by MUNKI C
lol. check your other tune for the review of this one
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those BASS-samples and others are the default uncopyrighted samples I got for free. Contains samples like "house" and "bust that jam"
also FX and one-shot samples
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09-05-2005 19:29 |
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Surya
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Vocals in the intro overpower your beats quite a bit...
Some kind of "bassline" - ahum - coming in. Sounds a bit dull... Your beats are still overpowered...
A bit weird to put your breaks so in the background when they seem to be the purpose of the track?
About them beats: ghosts aren't bad. Snare could use more punch to make an impackt. Same goes for the kick acually. Rides are way to loud.
As a track this is very boring acually. You have them beats, them vocals and than that... you know... sound...
Everything sounds very dry too, especially them vocals. Ever heard of reverb and delay 
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14-05-2005 18:59 |
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