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stickbubbly 
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i like the intro.
drums seem a bit light though.
nice dirty lead
think it could use more sub.
cant hear what the sample before the drop is saying but it sounds cool.
the strange lead that comes in at 2:21 doesnt seem to fit with the rest of your song.
I liked the first half, and i like the melody at the very end but there is a certain lead that seems to be too loud and off key in the middle of the track.
the rest was good.
cheers.
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07-05-2005 14:58 |
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er whats with the low bit rate??? i know it can be a chore uploading but, cmon man.
i yhink the others got this spot on, light drums, good ideas, jst need to be executed a bit more solidly.
what software are u using???
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11-05-2005 15:15 |
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teknyne
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sounds good. sounds as if its being played @ wrong speed tho. maybe drop the tempo a wee bit?
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12-05-2005 22:16 |
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Surya
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Quite fast, no?
Hoover is quite cool, the melody too...
Hmmm, seems like you forgot to add a bassline?
Drums sound very thin and need a boost (apart from the kick, which is loud enough)
Your second theme isn't very convincing...
Some good idears, but the structure and sound need quite some work!
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13-05-2005 14:44 |
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maz
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Interinsting, But!!!
I think you have big problem with mastering, sound don't have amplitude. (or possible because to much compress!!!)
Exact "Sound at 2.21 doesnt seem to fit with the rest of your song", melody is good but not the sound.
You have to work. 
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13-05-2005 14:54 |
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Sykotic
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Cool Dark Step track. Really creapy sounding bass throughout. Maybe a little over filtered at some points. Love the "bitch troll from hell" change and bass sound that falls in there. Very dark sounding track. Reminds me of alien robots attacking(thats a compliment). I look foward to checking out more Greyone tracks and hope he can advise me on mine.
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13-05-2005 20:55 |
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Greyone
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Originally posted by cynik
_edit: yikes! 
I just saw this track is 80kbps !!! no wonder it all sounds so lo-fi. why did you do that? NEVER go lower that 128, imo |
what's about that 80kbps ? how can I avoid it?
about the BPM : 190bpm , too fast ? should I take 180 ?
about the mastering: I compressed it a lot ( maybe too much )
thanx for the revieuws
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15-05-2005 19:48 |
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Surya
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Originally posted by greyone
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Originally posted by cynik
_edit: yikes!
I just saw this track is 80kbps !!! no wonder it all sounds so lo-fi. why did you do that? NEVER go lower that 128, imo |
what's about that 80kbps ? how can I avoid it?
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Use an encoder where you can choose the bitrate. There are topics about this in the software section or the Q&A section...
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about the BPM : 190bpm , too fast ? should I take 180 ? |
190 is indeed to fast imo. I produce at 176. 180 should be fine too, but I like having a tad more space to work with.
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15-05-2005 19:51 |
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equipped
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Great soundz, For what ever reason you reese was sounding weak. I personally have never used a reese sample or preset but I still noticed how thin it was sounding in your track. Well that's only one sound out of many. I thouht your track was full of great teqnique. enjoyed every second of it. 
Keep up the brilliant work. 
++Equipped++
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30-05-2005 12:38 |
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Greyone
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Originally posted by equipped
Great soundz, For what ever reason you reese was sounding weak. I personally have never used a reese sample or preset but I still noticed how thin it was sounding in your track. Well that's only one sound out of many. I thouht your track was full of great teqnique. enjoyed every second of it.
Keep up the brilliant work.
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euh... wtf is a 'reese sample' anyway ?
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06-06-2005 15:41 |
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demolitionkid
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Originally posted by Greyone
euh... wtf is a 'reese sample' anyway ? |
i like the track but it did sound kinda funny.now i know why.maybe thats why the sound at 230 (maybe) sounded out of place.when the highs get clipped all kinds of funny siblants are produced.i fuckin hate mp3s
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30-03-2007 06:26 |
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BattleDrone
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It's called Reece. Sound first used by Kevin Saunderson (AKA "Reece" aka "Shadow Dancer", aka several other names...) basically it's 2 saw waves with a finetuning of + or - 30 between them giving a "sliding" feel to the bass because the 2 waveforms get out of sync over time.
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30-03-2007 10:07 |
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demolitionkid
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Originally posted by BattleDrone
It's called Reece. Sound first used by Kevin Saunderson (AKA "Reece" aka "Shadow Dancer", aka several other names...) basically it's 2 saw waves with a finetuning of + or - 30 between them giving a "sliding" feel to the bass because the 2 waveforms get out of sync over time. |
thnx for the in depth info.........i knew how the sounds are made but not that specific place of origin.
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30-03-2007 19:35 |
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Halph-Price
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enjoy the way it starts. funny i had that sample fot eh bitch troll from wavs ha.
i enjy the track. but man this trac is so sparce. atmospheric pads mre, or better yet you could drop some vocals in there. vocals with dnb works so nicly. gives such a definition.
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31-03-2007 01:42 |
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Greyone
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EI BENDE FLIKKERS ZOEI KE NIE MIN ODDE NUMMERS REPLY'EN MERCI !!
dwaze nerds 
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31-03-2007 13:30 |
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Greyone
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and moderater please delete ALL my tracks , thanx
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31-03-2007 13:33 |
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BattleDrone
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Does that mean you are famous now? 
This is posting 666
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