stickbubbly 
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Registration Date: 16-09-2004
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Please check out my new track 'run witit' and post your comments here!!!
first i have to say thanks to the admin for getting the track uploads up and running again. i was starting to get a bit worried.
this track was made on logic 7 using atmosphere, absynth 3, and the albino 2.
any thoughts would be appreciated
cheers.
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06-05-2005 17:55 |
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Greyone
Master Producer
Registration Date: 01-04-2005
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the concept of a 'DNB - rave , house , ...' song is good but those drumrolls are bit repetitive , some mo variation could be more pleasant.
songs a bit too long ( 3:50 or 4:00 should be better)
anyway nice song 
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06-05-2005 19:03 |
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yeh like the energy in this....but the beats sound a bit like a sample pack. ha is that a theramin.
you need to boost the low end, try waves maxx bass, or c4.
or psp mixbass from the mixpack.
yeh again the energy is good, drum rolls are good to.
i like the kind of answer call thing going on with the leads.
pepersonally i would add something a bit dirtier to go with the leads, and just warm up that b line.
pm me and ill give u some info on the plug ins if u like.....
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07-05-2005 02:26 |
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thefunke1
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Registration Date: 09-12-2004
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Well, well tunes are back on the board!
Nice track, love some of the little sounds, melody's, and details throughout the track (especailly the Casper the Ghost sound, very Scooby Doo). The overall tune has a great up lifting feel to it, happy DnB instead of the dark pounding stuff. Track for sure gets your attention, and keeps ya moving, in a light bouncey mood.
Production quality is great, sounds don't compete, and are very clear, with careful attention to levels throughout.
Snare in some areas is a little weak, could have a little more punch, I agree with Munki C, the low end sub does need a little boost, as it sounds a little week in some areas.
Overall, another great track to add to the play list!!
Thanks
P.S. Your unique style is always a pleasure to listen to, each track you post is different, and incorporates new sounds, ideas, and beats. Keep'em coming!! 
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07-05-2005 15:51 |
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Nosrac
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Registration Date: 15-12-2004
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I've been listening to trip a lot and my only criticism is that the intro sounds light, empty or a bit casio-ish - which completely changes once the track gets under way. This track is tight right from the get go - nice sounding drums, but not quite as punchy as trip which were also very well backed up by those funky ass bongos. Some really big bright sounds in this one though - the worbling wa-wa-wa-wa is heavy and adds a dark endge to this otherwise bright track. Some great work with the vsts again and the theremin is great. Although the melodies are catchy, they aren't as memorable as some of your other tunes (I often get humming some of your old tracks and think I'm humming pendulum!) Some of the rolls are a bit to predictable and over all this track could use some of those heavy amen variations you had on trip. Another really excellent track and the production of this one and trip is in a new category from your older tracks, but still does need a bit more sub and maybe a bass drum with a bit more of a click to it instead of just a "thud". 4+/5
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Tunes pictures and info: Myspace Page
MP3's: Acid Planet Page
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07-05-2005 19:24 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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You have a very accesible style, with cool themes and well chosen sounds. Everythings clean and catchy. Nice
Only problem, again, is the sound, which still doesn't kick and punch enough... Bass is overall a bit lacking...
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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13-05-2005 14:46 |
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maz
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Registration Date: 23-04-2005
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Nice track, same if i don't like so much trancy sound.
For the kick i suggest you to compress it, if you got compressor effet...
Nice job. Rate 8/10
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Listen Maz compos on http://yann.bahler.club.fr
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13-05-2005 15:13 |
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Stutterstep
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Registration Date: 27-01-2005
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Yet another quality track, Very clean and crisp. I like the melody i . I think some more atmosphere through out the song would fill it nicely. I found it a little empty in the intro and maybe some pads through the track would be nice, other than that no problems, the mix is perfect, sound clean and sweet like sugar. Sorry for the late response, my cpu is fuc. BloodArm
Respect
Stutter 
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15-05-2005 06:15 |
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Halph-Price
Zombie Algorithm
Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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LOL
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hey this song is surfer style... yea i like it. it does lack punch. you need to boost a lot of it. the beats need to learn to have variations a bit. there not bad though... and that synth lead is nice, except you need to give it a bass boost. the melodies and everything else are very nice...
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16-05-2005 20:21 |
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Surya
The Robot
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Halph-Price has uploaded a remastered version here
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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18-05-2005 20:27 |
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k.c.walsh
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Registration Date: 26-01-2005
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22-05-2005 06:58 |
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Great work Stickbubbly! Im pretty shure your wee nogin was infront of the old monitar for a long long time doin this we project. For this song requires **Skill!** Skill indeeed son. Well am a wee bit 
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