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dNk dNk is a male
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Happy Check out this tune please

Its kinda Calibre style i guess Pleased


Here it is :

http://www.zone.ee/cyclohexanone/DNK%20-%20Don't%20Call.mp3



Tnx Bigup
03-05-2005 20:13
cynik cynik is a male
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"ERROR 404!

Kontrolli, kas oled sisestanud otsitava aadressi õigesti!"


I don't know what it means but it kept me from d/l your tune



edit:_WAIT WAIT I GOT IT shit what was that now it did give me the error but the song started downloading

sorry My Mistake

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03-05-2005 20:26 Homepage of cynik
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hahah lol , its ok Big Grin
03-05-2005 20:47
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ok, your soundquality suffers greatly. there is bass (this is drum&bass) but it is very low in volume

that pitchbended sound that folows through the track is really annoying. maybe keep it in the intro but make it stop when the track actually beggins.

good "baby dont call" sample

there is something wrong the break in 2:06 imo. maybe its mis-placed somehow?

it gets boring, the whole track, doesn't have a solid structure.

but, keep trying!!!

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03-05-2005 21:33 Homepage of cynik
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hehe yeah man thanks , i every day experements something to be original , i will try to do better , tnx for comment Bigup
03-05-2005 21:51
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thanks man Bigup
03-05-2005 22:44
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Quite nice drums.

Intro goes on too long with little happening.

Drop: bassline is very high and lacking sub. Maybe layer it with the same one one octave down?

And again it goes on a bit without really something happening. I think you'll have to add some extra melodies and stuff to fill up the gap...

Not bad as a basis, but you need more elements to make it somewhat intresting...

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10-05-2005 08:23 Homepage of Surya
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thanks Surya Big Grin
10-05-2005 19:04
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