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cynik 
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03-05-2005 10:48 |
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anf0 D
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03-05-2005 11:07 |
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cynik
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intro-wise pumpin ok, tho "bassline" maybe too loud?
vocals could use a bit more reverb
you used a sample for the main bassline around 1:48-2:27 just too much. I prefer the simpler one before that, playing the same tune
good drums but weak on those raving parts, maybe making them louderon those parts could be good
too much vocal use, repeating too much, but thats my personal taste. I'd make them very present at breaks but throw em out in mid-song parts
break - indeed. breaks break works good. almost Prodigy-like
the whole track needs level adjusting and some more fx imo
you got great amount of energy pumpin in this one - it can be easily felt.
work more on this - has potential
pros: the energy, break-ideas and good variation throughout
cons: levels and eq, too much vocal use, the main tune is just mediocre
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03-05-2005 17:17 |
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Surora23
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#1 the ghost face killah thing might be a prob with copywrites but i dont think so cause its dnb...and he sucks anyway....but heres my reivew 
cool intro...everything seems pretty clear...drums nice and punchy...
break...really dry and empty...
drop...its alright...im not fond of that really digi sounding bass...and i was never a fan of the rave synths used in dnb...it doesnt work imo...
Pretty repetetive for its vibe....
GOOD:Sound is pretty clear...bass couled be a diff sample and a boost..
BAD: Pretty repeteive...and the rave synth is pretty dated...ithas to be used right..and in a lot of cases its not...The vox are over used imo and are a bit dry...try some delay etc...second drop isnt very intersting...spice it up with some diff drum patterns and bass switches... the bass was my biggest beef...it didnt sound bad...it just doesnt fit...sound like it wouldve been a decent track in 98, but doesnt meet any standards to todays DnB, so it leaves the track quite boring and repetoive...
Overal...some really good ideas...just add some diff bass and switch the track up more... do some more work on this...its a good idea...just needs to be taken much further
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or 6/10
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03-05-2005 17:59 |
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anf0 D
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hehe thanx guys... yeah ill contiune tweaking it...
but im not changing the old skoolizm of the synths n bass.
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