maz
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23-04-2005 01:23 |
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23-04-2005 01:26 |
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marine289 
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Works fine for me.
Ok, here's my first review witht the new rating system, so im kinda nervous 
(nah j/k 
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btw: welcome on drumnbass.be (i have never seen you around, so i assume you are new). Are you new on producing too?
And what program do you use?
Anyway, the review:
Intro is nice, the rhodes are nice, but could use some more reverb maybe.
Drums sound good, very jungle-like. Some nice effects before the drop.
I dont really like the drums in this, especially the snare. Also your drums are too soft, or the rhodes are just too loud.
Some nice things done with the vocals, but maybe a little too much used once in a while (dont get me wrong, they are really good, but sometimes just too much).
Bassline is good, but also a little low on velocity. (and a little bit of variation wouldn't hurt)
I like the part where there's just the drums, vocals and bass.
Nice pad coming in at around 3:30, brings in the atmosphere that was lacking at the beginning. But you should do more things with it then just the one tone.
I assume this is not your first track, it sounds way too good for that.
It's just that the rhodes are a bit too much on the foreground (that;s how I feel it) and the rhodes aren't even that interesting after the first 2 minutes, since there's no variation. It's a good thing you didnt use it the whole track. But anyway, I feel like it's more of a background instrument.
Overall very nice track, I can hear you have experience (unless it's all just loops
). Just fix some levels, and maybe just a little bit variation (although I dont think it's really needed).
I would rate this 3.5/5 on the old rating system, so with the new system that would be 7/10.
Keep it up 
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23-04-2005 08:55 |
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maz
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Sorry for not explain how i am, but it was later yesterday... 
Exactly, it's my first step on drumnbass.de, and and i found this forum nice.
I work with reason 3.0. My experience of music star 10 yaer ago with Djing, after i by a MC303 
and use it 2 year. and i star the production on Pc five mouth ago.
Sure, your right for your comment, I don't know if your are went on my web page, but if you like electro you can find "drummer for ever" it's my last track and probebly the best. I hope to be better and better...
Thanx for your comment, but i dont know if i will take more time with this track, i like to change usually.. 
Thanx for your rate, when i read oser comment on forum, i think peaple know what they writh, and i was little bit nervous about rating
Maz
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23-04-2005 09:54 |
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Surya
The Robot
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Hmmm, the rhodes are offbeat sometimes, can't you fix that?
The vocal becomes a bit annoying after a while imo.
The drums are a bit too much hi-hats and nog enough snare.
The bleep @ 3.00 is too loud.
Not bad, but not as intresting or good as Ocean or No Return...
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