 Maz - In Your Face |
maz
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Registration Date: 23-04-2005
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Hello,It's my first step on this forum. Look like Good.
I will propose you 4 track: In Your Face
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Listen Maz compos on http://yann.bahler.club.fr
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23-04-2005 01:20 |
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cynik 
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detailed stuff, at first glance seems lots of work went into this, all melodies on key. drums are good, hihats groove is very nice, love that crash. nice bass sounds as the main bassline kicks in 1:40. flowing groove all the way.
I also like the strings sound tho it plays only 1 note
the drums somehow resemble samba, rumba.. imo doesnt fit with the rest of elemnts which are not played in such manner
the sampled vox are ok, but you seem using them too much, sounds forced out, gets repetiotious and remind of fatboy slim.. this was ment as a "dislike" but you may see it as a good thing... its personal taste
but the track really gets nowhere from the intro, nothing big happens here
overall: an ok colin mcrae 06 intro track.. altho its efectively done, I miss the one idea here which might distinguish it from others, er, doesnt punch "in my face" as the title suggests.. 
cant rate this.. but hope the feedback helps.
peace
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23-04-2005 07:44 |
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maz
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i think i have to take an english teatcher, because i don't all understand... 
But you certainly right for i thing, voice is probebly to much.
Thanx for comment.
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23-04-2005 10:03 |
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Surya
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Cool stuff man!
Some more power in the drums would be very welcome though, some nice smashing snares and stuff 
Nice one, but try adding some power to the drums!
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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06-05-2005 21:01 |
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thefunke1
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Intro nice, drums and samples sounds great, although not a great lover of the dirty synth sound. hmmm.. like the melow string synth... tune becomes a little repatative, needs some change up, or other elemets brought in, overall tune has a certain feel to it, but can't quite put my finger on it....
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07-05-2005 16:26 |
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maz
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Thanx to all. (just 3 
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Your comment is enough encouraging for a rework.
I will work on, and hope be better.
I send message after work.
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Listen Maz compos on http://yann.bahler.club.fr
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