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iNSiGHt
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Please check out my new track 'ONE TWO MANY (test)' and post your comments here!!!
This is the first version of a track i did last night.
Phantom Audio meets Ed Rush Optical '98 vibin'
PEACE
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16-04-2005 13:31 |
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potatohead
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awesome drums. they sound live. i like that. the only two suggestions i have is more sub bass and maybe add a little more variation to the song. the sequencing on this song is awesome. perfect for djs. I would give this song a 5/5 for drums and 3/5 for bass. overall i give it a 4.5/5 for the perfect sequencing.
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16-04-2005 15:54 |
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iNSiGHt
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Thanks potatoehead, yeah it's work in progress, only four hours and 3 of that was on the drums lol.
I'll be back next week with the finished product.
Cheers for taking the time.
PEACE
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17-04-2005 00:53 |
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Surora23
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cool intro...cool drums....drop wasnt too exciting imo...andi there is way to much reverb on the durms...they sound good...but its a little too bright...melody and stuff wasnt exactly my style...i wasnt feeling the bass abd stuff either...Not too much variation on teh durms...wish tthere was more going on...
And the track rolls on through out...
Cool idea..Just a bit diff than what im used to for my tastes...and the drums were bothering me
keep it up...
3/5 sound
3/5 track
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17-04-2005 03:00 |
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wreakon
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i liked the drum programming but they sound really weak and quiet
nice tune but definitely needs work on the sound
some parts sound quite messy.. sounds kinda all mashed together... no reverb over the master channel is there ??
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17-04-2005 06:04 |
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cynik
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Originally posted by potatohead
awesome drums. they sound live. i like that. the only two suggestions i have is more sub bass and maybe add a little more variation to the song. |
I agree there with potato.
that retro-sound - nice delay! Fits wit the drums quite niice.I very much like sequencing-arrangement
that uiuiuiuiuiuiui sound is somewhat annoying. just my personal taste.
Id maybe add more variation in drums and that bassline (the 1 that starts with the intro) could use a change somewhere ??
the vocals/samples fit in quite qood
and this is v hard to achieve
overall: pretty nice 3.5/5
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17-04-2005 11:54 |
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DISKYZE
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i really like the way you edited those drum loops.. very fresh...real nice choice on the og hiphop stab...was waitng for the big bang and when it came is wasnt big enough...try some variation on your basses and maybe a different mid line as well....i will keep an ear out keep up the good work..D
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18-04-2005 07:52 |
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stickbubbly
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ya, drums are nice.
didnt like the melody in the intro. and it went on a bit long.
build up to the drop is well done but i didnt like how the drums came in. try taking out the bouncy bass for a frame right before the drums kick in at 2:35. should give the drop more of a drop feel to it.
i like the choices in sounds.
its a good start . ill keep an ear out for the finished product.
cheers.
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18-04-2005 22:12 |
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Paki
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Ok the intro is too short.
But the drums are ok nice filtering and compression.
Nees to do some more work around the baseline and the vocals.
The basseline is too distorted
The tune is ok everything patches as it seem to be.
But I think that it needs more compreion on the entire track(master compression)
It isn`t too long or too short so it seem ok
keep it up men looking forward to the final version
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19-04-2005 12:13 |
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dark pads, bit old sounding......
id lose the reverb on the drums, or make it a smaller room verb,
yes the vocal is nice, sounds a bit like kung fu fighting....woo oh oh oooo yknow.karl douglas.
bass needs to be louder, its good but gets a bit repetitive, could do with being broken up a bit, try hooking up the pad melody to a filter conected to an lfo and sync to the tempo just to add variation.
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23-04-2005 18:32 |
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Surya
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Very nicely done drums!
The pad gets a bit boring quite fast though.
The vocals are very soulfull, but I don't like them.
Buildup is nice
Drop: doesn't have very much impact. Maybe do the bassline HPed before the drop to have the bass kick in there?
Some good ideas and very nice drums, but ultimately not very intresting themes...
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05-05-2005 16:55 |
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Greyone
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Drums are very good exept for that kick (rolls too much) , high quality sound , nice effects and vocals.
get's a 7/10
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09-05-2005 18:31 |
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