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DISKYZE
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Registration Date: 16-10-2004
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Please check out my new track 'TRANSMISSIONS RMX' and post your comments here!!!
DISKZE PHASE 1 COMPLETE..
PHASE 2 INNITIATED...
This track has been deleted. Reason: Old tracks removed
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16-04-2005 05:37 |
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Surya 
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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The sound and melody of the square could use some work imo, its a bit too basic.
Drums sound distorted 
Sub is nice though
Not bad, but needs a lot of work to turn into a real intresting track imo
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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19-04-2005 11:22 |
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Paki
Cool Steppa
Registration Date: 03-04-2005
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The sine and the square tune is not good.
Too simple
The basdrum is overloaded and distorted.
needs more work on it
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19-04-2005 12:16 |
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stickbubbly
mad man
Registration Date: 16-09-2004
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i like how the beat comes in bit by bit at the start.
I was hoping to hear a heavier bass. it seems a bit soft, deep and distorted.
its a cool idea. melody is a bit too simple for me though.
the main thing i was liking in this track was the beat. it had me boppin my head.
cheers.
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19-04-2005 14:53 |
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DISKYZE
Member
Registration Date: 16-10-2004
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thanx for the input..it was just a random idea...but i still feel i could do some more work on it....bring on the breakbeat....D
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21-04-2005 06:56 |
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maz
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Registration Date: 23-04-2005
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I don't like it. Your synth-Bell have nothing good. Drum is not specialy. Bass can be good but not in this track. Sorry.
Rate: 2/10
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Listen Maz compos on http://yann.bahler.club.fr
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23-04-2005 14:14 |
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teknyne
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Registration Date: 12-05-2005
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sounds to me as if the whole tune was building up to something that never happened. maybe try cutting it down and using it as a 32ish bar intro then go somewhere else after a breakdown. as other people have said the bass drum is overloading a bit and could do with a bit of tweaking.
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13-05-2005 18:31 |
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S.O.T.A.
SHADOW STAR
Registration Date: 13-05-2005
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hi there im S.O.T.A. i listened to you remix. I don't mean to be mean but the intro line is kind of bad. It's cool how the drums pick up but they are a little rough. I like break beat music too and it makes me think of a breaks track. I think you could do a lot more with this. pick up the two step beat into yours. It didn't really feel like drum and bass. It seems pretty short too. Well take it easy 
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17-05-2005 08:14 |
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dubcupboard
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Registration Date: 16-05-2005
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This a constructive but brutally honest review of your tune.
The drum/break is unconventional and not really DnB authentic,the kick/snare ratio
doesnt quite roll on point,a fair attempt though. not bad.
Theres not really any impact on the first drop apart from a meaty bottom end to
fatten things up.
The synth sounds borderline cheese, and carries on from intro to drop and continues
not creatin much surprise.
Although the tunes not quite long enough to give a more rounded review
I dont feel theres much to look forward to judging on what I heard.
On the basis of the above Im gonna give this one a 4 out of 10
with a review to an average attempt that could of put a lot more work in.
Im not a perfect producer myself so dont take offense to this or other reviews I submit,
some people have already taken me the wrong way, but im not here to kiss backside!
If no one tells u straight up you wont progress
keep it up!
Dubcupboard.
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17-05-2005 20:50 |
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Emblem-X
Master Producer
Registration Date: 10-11-2002
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i'm digging this!
only the sub sounds somewhat out of tone somtimes
nice athosphere! cool samples 
beats are nice but need a bit of variation.
2min is a bit short but it's got potential for sure!
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18-05-2005 00:21 |
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