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Please check out my new track 'Erasor' and post your comments here!!!
Here it is my first track, jeej!!! I know it sucks but the next one will be beter, i hope.
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9-0
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nice idea of recording your guitar and taking it to a drum 'n bass level
thought the gun noices were a bit...too much
looking forward to the next one
KP ! (in da house)
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15-04-2005 20:59 |
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Originally posted by greyone
suddenly breaks for some seconds doesn't fit |
there suposed to be a vocal but the problem is i aint got no microphone.
And dont worry the drums will be beter next time
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16-04-2005 11:52 |
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Rude 
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guitar in drumnbass, I thought about that alot,
just bought myself new "snaren" (nickel-steel for electric guitars) and I'll try some metaldrumnbass-stuff..
the review:
intro 
the f*** is that
fx = much too loud or your drums are much too quiet
haha lol you're playing too fast
now too slow
ohh wait snare..
click..
wow takes quite a while to take that shot
taddahdahdahdah lalalala
click ....................................... bang
click bang click bang click bang (hmm I guess you're empty)
back to guitar .. no wait back to bass-thing
hmmm I don't really know what to say about this,
quite good for a first track! hmmm it stopped..
bang*cutted off*
structure: 2/5
sound: 2/5
idea: 3/5 (not overused, it's just that almost everybody thought of it before)
overal rating: 2.25/5
I'll go fetch my guitar
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Surora23
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woah...weird intro but my speackers are clipping like crazyyyyyyyyy.......
ive been playing guitar for a few years... and a lot of your strums are off....drums are hella lofi too...
oh gun cock sound...is the song over? oh no...ok drop...
reece/bass sounds a bit too digital...some things sound a bit out of key...
not a horrible idea...just wasnt taken in the right direction...
http://www.humanimprint.com/mp3/archangelclip.mp3
click that link...thast what guitar in dnb should sound like...
2/5 sound
2/5track
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Rinse it OUT!!!! 
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16-04-2005 22:44 |
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DISKYZE
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live instrumentation must be used.alot of my samples i play live..keep experimenting 
try recording a guitar loop or riff convert to a rex and import into reason..nothin but good times...D
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18-04-2005 08:19 |
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Surya
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Kick is way too deep
Snare is WAY too distant, you can almost hear it
Same goes for the other parts of the drums
Guitar is quite nice, but it's offbeat sometimes.
Drop: Bassline has WAY too much bass. The volume of the drums is a bit better, in some parts, but the they sound a bit too much like an old drummachine.
Basic theme and basslinesound are fine, but the levels are completely fucked, and there's not enough stuff to keep it intresting.
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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18-04-2005 14:28 |
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Halph-Price
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when recording guitars, you must do several takes of them identicaly, than you layer them on top of eachother to thicken them, you can then loop it over, as long as you keep the drums going and the bass.
but the important thing is to layer the guitar to make it sound aggressive adn cool like it sounds live. learned that from mettalratica.
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22-04-2005 00:48 |
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-KP-
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yeah this guitar thing, I recorded it by connecting the headphone-out from my guitar amp to the mic-in from my computer. the problem with my guitaramp is that if you use the headphone-out there isnt any sound comin out of the speaker, so while recording it I couldn't hear what i was playing. that s why it sounds rather crapy.
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22-04-2005 18:35 |
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Rude
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yea I got thesame problem !!
when I play live, I can't hear a thing of what I'm playin' !!
totally sucks.. Right now I'm lookin' for a splitter to put in the amp-output.. that way I can plug 2 jacks in it.
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22-04-2005 19:32 |
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Rude
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hmmm distorted and heavyyyyy
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25-04-2005 17:26 |
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Halph-Price
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hoenstly, there is no other output? did you pic the amp up at wal-mart?
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26-04-2005 04:05 |
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-KP-
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just you wait until i can upload my newest tracks. 
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30-04-2005 12:45 |
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Sykotic
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First impression "What the hell is going on with this cruedly recorded guitar?" Super low-fi, I like the switch to the super fat distorted bass sound which is clipping very badly, and it completely overwelms every other sound. The bass sound makes the guitar part make sense. Also bad timing on the gun-shot sounds, consider shortening the silent gaps. Definately an interesting peice, as ugly as it is (I assume the ugliness is intentional). I can't really see this being mixed into any DJ's set though.
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GreatFisherCat
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First,
I want to congratulate you for your first track! 
Obviously, like others have said, you have still lot to do, before you sound professional. I have only one advice to add to others:
_Make_more_tracks_ 
other advices include checking these two applications:
Ableton Live ( http://www.ableton.com ) and Steinberg Sequel ( http://www.sequel-music.net/ ) which are simple and good (dunno about sequel though, I've tested only Live) sequencers for making music quick. They sort you nicely, are very inspirational and fun to use - aid in making music.
Other things is to go to a library, and read some books about making music - especially mixing and mastering advice will help you much, improve your sound quality.
Thumbs up for good try, your next one will probably be bit better, next one a bit better again and so on, that's how it goes
Can I ask, how old are you? 
-Mikko
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Greyone
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Originally posted by GreatFisherCat
First,
I want to congratulate you for your first track!
Obviously, like others have said, you have still lot to do, before you sound professional. I have only one advice to add to others:
_Make_more_tracks_
other advices include checking these two applications:
Ableton Live ( http://www.ableton.com ) and Steinberg Sequel ( http://www.sequel-music.net/ ) which are simple and good (dunno about sequel though, I've tested only Live) sequencers for making music quick. They sort you nicely, are very inspirational and fun to use - aid in making music.
Other things is to go to a library, and read some books about making music - especially mixing and mastering advice will help you much, improve your sound quality.
Thumbs up for good try, your next one will probably be bit better, next one a bit better again and so on, that's how it goes
Can I ask, how old are you?
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dont dig up old tracks please
and that producer hasnt been here on the board for 2 years
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GreatFisherCat
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erq.
I wonder how I did do that
I thought I got that from front page, in list of new tracks
-Mikko
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