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Rude 
I'm gonna get you
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Please check out my new track 'Rude (couldn't find a good title..)' and post your comments here!!!
I've spent alot of time on this
It was worth it
about the drums: they sound WAY better then first, so..
anyway here it is, tell me what you think
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14-04-2005 18:24 |
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cynik
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14-04-2005 18:53 |
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Rude
I'm gonna get you
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here's my own review: I like the intro
I like the drums I used in the intro
and then the intro stops and the song begins
couldn't use those drums all the time because they would sound too empty if I did
those hihats are nice
ride is nice
but seems like my breaks are too loud,
didn't notice this untill I listened to it in my normal headphones..
This song was made on these HUGE speakers
with and increddible subwoofer
so sorry if the drum are too loud, it was already too late when I noticed..
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14-04-2005 20:50 |
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cynik
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nice intro - cool pad
you dont do drums much justice throughout the intro but it sounds almost,, kinda,,,.. panacea.
I like the idea with the hihats and that trancey melody. cool sound in 1:48 - the thud.
whats with reverse cymbals galore and then everything goeas away 
I must force myself to dig the idea, which exists definitely but the realization is lacking
pads go away vs trance - I dont like this. as it progresses it gets really empty and boring. did you make this melody or use a loop? it has some potential in it
I like the part around 3:40. very blatant chorus, empty sounding drums but somehow old school-module like 
the graph eq shows holes everywhere 
must be the speakers
my review is kind of muffled but so is this track and I aint clearing it up
keep tryin 
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14-04-2005 23:31 |
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Greyone
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intro : the sound is so brilliant , nice chosen
before drop: nice fade out
drop: cool , but unexpected , good drums
rating: 3.5/5
too bad there wasn't a fat bass bumpin' the song up
laterz
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14-04-2005 23:40 |
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Rude
I'm gonna get you
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track was made in Magix, and made with samples, these were all one-hit samples, and I started pitching 'm up n stuff, so..
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15-04-2005 17:19 |
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Paki
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Ok Rude!
Interesting I might say but the kick of the drums id domehow too trance.
The arpegio seem also trance.
But I like the loops somewhere at 2min.
Perhaps some comresion on the drums would do better 
Also like the stereo efect on the drums that comes partial.
Interesting choir
But the arpegio seem too digital that is the staf i dont like.
To sum up it`s good track but you could do it better.
I`ve heard much better tracks from you
If I rate this from 1-5 I would give it 3.5
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18-04-2005 14:04 |
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Surya
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Intro: kick sounds a bit digital... Not too fond of the panning on the snare. Things like that should be in the center imo...
Choir cuts away a bit abruptly. Rework that fade out.
Arpish stuff coming in again, I think you really like that? Melody is nice, not great.
Drop: bassline should be a bit fuller, but quite good. Drums: way too agressive around 7khz. Makes them sound a bit hollow too...
When you cut to the less agressive drums, those are too distant. The difference between the two is too big.
Choir in the break: drown it in reverb!
Overall your melody sounds a bit too happy imo
You're clearly improving, this track sounds less empty than your previous ones, but you've still got a long way to go.
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18-04-2005 14:15 |
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DISKYZE
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THE DRUMS IN THE INTRO ARE TOO MIDI SOUNDING..AND THE ARPEG GETS ANNOYING REAL FAST....THE SECOND AMEN THAT COMES IN IS WAY BETTER...THIS TRACK STILL NEEDS SOME WORK IN MY OPINION...ILL HAVE TTO HEAR SOME OF YOUR OTHER TUNES....PEAS OUT D
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19-04-2005 06:03 |
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that intro pad sounds suspiciously familiar, good though.
very steppy beats, lose the panning on the snare,
theres a slight issue with the tuning of the arpeggio, doesnt match the pad.
aaaargh lose the compression on the hats, its to much.
i quite like the choir bit, reminds me of some older hardcore.
cool
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23-04-2005 18:40 |
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D Juice
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Really lovely track, once the intro is over. the intro is kinda bad imo. the snaredrum is really weak and the kick could do well on having some extra punch in it.
the breakdown is pretty cool but some atmos could be added.
the melodie sound is really really lovely, but the melody itself could me a little more interresting.
once it drops, the sub is cool but could growl a little more, maybe some distortion or layering will work out.
the beat-eq-in needs to be overdone WAY too much high pass and the kick is again too weak.
maybe its cool to add a phat reece underneath it. i got some reeces on stock on my PC, you could mail me for 'm [luuk_bos89@hotmail.com]
now id like to ask you something: how did you make the beat? i've been interrested on these kind of beats for a pretty long time now, and still havent figured how to make them.
PLEASE MAIL ME!!!!!
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02-04-2007 14:33 |
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JayG
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good on this one for sure. the track is a good idea but i think it need more work. very trancie feel . i feel like its missing some thing from the track i cant put my fingure on it but it is. the bass is ver hollow sounding and need to be fuller , the melodie of the bass is nice jsut needs a fuller sound. i can never stress enough compression on drums and bass help with the sound so much. not that its need all the time but i think it would help this track by tweaking the commpression. not big on the paning of snares. max respect hope to hear some more from ya
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06-04-2007 02:38 |
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artificial
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realaxing intro indeedy.. that beat is also pretty cool... percussion does an interesting buildup id put something to back that up... random timed drum hits... then this electro arp sound is coming in thats quite cool. reverse cymbal is a bit too loud... there isnt much body in your drums... a lot of high... but no body... that cymbal colors it red .. .way too loud... after a while im getting kinda tired of that arp but thats my taste... ok you got a switch going... pretty vocal angel synth... id try gating it a little when your break comes back in.. that could be interesting maybe if you sidechain the gate to the kick and then your synth becomes more floaty and moves more with your song... bass coming back in is cool but i still tihnk there is too much high it sounds piercing... still the melody remains the same and it kinda loses my interest in a while... maybe you should layer it after a while to increase its impact and presence in another way... put a filter over it or something... and change the cutoff here and there... and adding some stabs here and there could make the melody a little more interesting. overal yeah kinda electro-ish... not bad... but still needs a lot of work.
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06-04-2007 17:49 |
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BattleDrone
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Originally posted by Halph-Price
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06-04-2007 20:25 |
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Paracyte
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God job on drums, nice pad ,arrange bit boring ,love to see some nice lead in it,nice choirs.Not bad.6/10
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