cynik 
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Please check out my new track 'up the second' and post your comments here!!!
so my 1st submission so feedback is greatly appreciated!!! its not a new track. actualy its one of my old favorites
greetz
This track has been deleted on the producer's request
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13-04-2005 20:04 |
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tetchy
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likes - very fuckin steppy, the lead is hot fire(i like the lfo action on that.....i mean i guess that's what it is i'm new to production), sub bass tone
dislikes - the drum kit, maybe a harder snare would help out or maybe if it weren't such a high pitched snare.
i give it a B+
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13-04-2005 20:50 |
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Greyone
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Snare's a bit disapointing
bassline is cool , a lot of changing ,could use a boost
drumnrolls ->work on it , use some (more) layers
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13-04-2005 21:31 |
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cynik
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Originally posted by tetchy
lfo action |
you are right - I fiddled the rate/ammount of the lfo on the filter
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dislikes - the drum kit, maybe a harder snare would help out or maybe if it weren't such a high pitched snare.
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It creeped on me when I got it done,, the other samples are maybe too agressive for such soft drums. as for the snare, I know I made a mistake cos I programed the drums 1st it is maybe overpitched
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Snare's a bit disapointing
drumnrolls ->work on it , use some (more) layers |
I did have trouble with the snare cos its made of like, a dozen different sounds 
thanx for the reviews, keep em coming!!!
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14-04-2005 00:09 |
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Darkside
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intro is kinda sketchy with the volume shifts on the lead, kinda throws the rhythm off. kinda annoying there, you're not really sure what the tune's gonna be.
cool vocal fx.
bass seems well balanced with everything.
the drum kit sounds like it has too much of something eq-wise, but i'm not gonna get too indepth cuz i'm afraid i'll get to the point where i don't know what i'm talking about.
not liking the way you just drop out everything and bring it back in and drop it out around 2:40. don't keep takin the kick drum out.
the resonant pinging fx kind of hurts my ears.
throughout this track i can tell you have potential, but the sound quality is off and drop is sorta weird. oh oops i just read this is one of your old favorites? perhaps you know how to make ur songs sound better now
well anyway, 3/5, keep it up!
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14-04-2005 02:35 |
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Surora23
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weird intro....dont really know how you droped those drums...it was weird...cool melody...about 1:30 in...mellody has some cool effects on it and stuff...building some minor tension...and the rest goes on...
Good
-cool melody
-steppy idea
-decent sound
bad
-quite boring...the track doesnt conform to a real track thatd be out ther eon vinyl...theres not real build up....drop...build up...and rop...outro thing...
-nothing changes much...all teh same elements with good variations on teh synths and what not...
-bass doesnt do much...
3.5/sound
2.5/5 track
great idea...but work on the track quite a bit more...this could be a good one for sure imo 
keep it up! 
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Rinse it OUT!!!! 
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14-04-2005 04:17 |
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Surya
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Buildup in the intro is quite nice! Slowly builds and builds...
Drop: snare sounds really thin man, layer with a more punchy one! Lacking a bit of bass too, that wasp isn't enough. It sounds a bit empty and lifeless as it is...
Gets a bit repetetive since you keep using the same elements the whole time. Try adding a bit more stuff!
Has nice ideas, but needs more work to be great...
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14-04-2005 10:14 |
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Paki
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Ok so thee good staff isthat i like the intro
I also liked the basseline and the plays with the drums.
I also liked the idea
Didn`t like the sawtooth and the "ah" sound thatcames in backround.
Didn`t liked the scretches
It`s somehow monotone and lacs of power needs to be some more rolling and more powerfull.
The outro isn`t good it cames sudenly.
But i liked the idea so if I rate it from 1-10 i would giveit 7.5
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14-04-2005 13:49 |
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cynik
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thanx all for reviewin
I will be changing:
the entire rhythm section maybe keep the hihats n percussions ?,
will make some more powerful breaks
layer the "wasp" (lol@ who said that
) to make it more punchy
put some more effort for the subbass sound sequence
cant think of anything else right now
@paki: I didnt put scratches at all. 
maybe thelfo sounds like that? check again plz.
more ideas welcome!
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14-04-2005 15:26 |
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DISKYZE
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a lil on the boring side for me...not a bad tune ,just not my taste...D
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18-04-2005 08:48 |
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cynik
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18-04-2005 10:08 |
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Rude
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not THAT BAD man 
the drums are.. not that good though..
basskicks are too low.. all you here is P*
you could have used a better kick
bit repetitive.. no?
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