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Paki Paki is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Eteberya Fortu' and post your comments here!!!

Ok so this is my second track. I`ve tryed to apply some of the tips you`ve give to me so i hope you`ll like it. Waiting for the reviews


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10-04-2005 23:40
wreakon wreakon is a male
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cool little track Smile

some nice filtering on the drums

nice style.. i like the trippy alien sounds and they all go well together

gets boring quite fast but good effort and i look forward to more Big Grin

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11-04-2005 12:35 Homepage of wreakon
Paki Paki is a male
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Thanks man I apreciate it Big Grin I`m aware of the dynamics of the song but i`m trying to improve myself Tongue Just working on something new espetially on dynamics and flow changes during the song Bigup
11-04-2005 13:23
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damn, quite irritating tune you got there mate, cool fx though, and your drums have improved alot, lemme tell ya that! anyway, it's a good sound, but that tune uggghhhh

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11-04-2005 17:20 Homepage of Rude
Paki Paki is a male
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Ughhh Rude come on give some usefull tips man Bigup You could see that i`ve apllyed your tips man Tongue What should i do with the tune ????
12-04-2005 00:24
Surya Surya is a male
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Drums are quite punchy, which is good. now give them a bit more snap Wink

Melodies are really annoying, and the synths aren't great.

Bass could use a boost.

Yah, really annoying melodies man!

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12-04-2005 11:40 Homepage of Surya
Paki Paki is a male
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So Surya if I get the idea the drums and the basseline are ok but the synths are not.
Thank you gyes I`ll try to apply what you`ve said in my new track Tongue
But i still need more reviews .
Mybe some tips abiut how the melodies should roll???
After all I am still a starter and this is my second track so anything is worth Smile
12-04-2005 11:48
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well, it's good, but the tune.. ughh it's an awful tune, so that's my advice, get another tune Bigup

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12-04-2005 18:13 Homepage of Rude
Greyone Greyone is a male
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it's a bit monotone if you know what i mean , just put some more variation in that tune . drums are good and my final rating ...3/5
Keep it going Pleased
13-04-2005 21:02
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So it apperas that thetuneisirritating Confused Ok I`ll try to do something about it.
Thanks gyes Pleased
14-04-2005 13:35
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quote:
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So it apperas that thetuneisirritating Confused Ok I`ll try to do something about it.
Thanks gyes Pleased


it becomes irritating. if you mess about it, put 2-3 patterns changed, dunno try some stuff like shifting or slowing it down and speed up,,, may not become irritating in the track after a while listening.
I found listenenig 2 it first thing you listen to in the morning and then latert get new ideas . Tongue

the drums techically sound good. but they seem just been thrown in there with barely much sensibility. just sound coldly inmixed with only that filter on it

sample is ok. maybe timestretching it would get some nice effects and do well for the song Bigup

something in the arrangement bugged me also, maybe some breaks and drums sections dont fit in Confused check that

I feel this is far from best you can do. I want to hear more Confused Bigup

edit_: sounds good but on some shit speakers so it doesnt help much does it hehe

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15-04-2005 20:50 Homepage of cynik
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