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REDGE
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Please check out my new track 'CRYSTAL MAZE' and post your comments here!!!
Hey its a newish track that ive started on. Its not long so check it out. Also no where near finished, lots to do. Freq's are messed up and stuff but its pretty original opinions well apreiciated!
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10-04-2005 20:32 |
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Paki 
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Ok my men interesting idea 
Now aboy th freq. about the snare 
It`s too punchy so if you could reduce the velocity or ... And the track itself is somehow dull and it gets a little borring
Some more variations would probably help 
The basseline is missing or at least I couldn`t hear it... But i loved the intro and the beat. The beat is very nice and I really liked it 
Exelent work with the sawtooth also 
In general the idea is quite good so keep it up
Something tells me that you are creating awesome tracks
oh yeah.. Exelent work with the bassdrums in the beat very original
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11-04-2005 00:04 |
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cynik
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I like this sound in the beggining, tune is cool, the hihats work well: sounds promissing
I dont like the tune nor the instrument that comes in 00:45 I would kick it out. ouch! snare doesnt have punch ,so you compensated with the loudness of it, if I am not mistaken?
this all gets into a mess! with no basskick, hte idea is there, but somehow it seems you need some xperience in sequencing department as for the slowdowns and speedups, not quite feeling that
the tunes interfere all the time with eachother theres simply too much of them at the same time- not much dnb but maybe some other style.
keep tryin
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11-04-2005 00:23 |
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REDGE
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Hey cheerz for downloadin guys I apprieciate your points fully. Im dont agree that its not DnB tho.
Yeh the snare is loud and my sound system isn't to great at the mo.
Its kinda experimental, producing somthing really original is hard work. Im gunna change alot of things with this track, the bassline is kinda weak, im guna pump it up.
Cynik - The slow down, thats goin for sure. The snare is far to loud needs crunchin and volume lowering. Thanks for your comments man!
Paki - Thanks man, very positive and your ideas are right. Things are changin!
Please d/l this tune everyone, I need critisism and apprieciate everyones comments individually.
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11-04-2005 13:19 |
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Paki
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Cynk i think that this track is dnb howcome that it isn`t????? 
Very interesting ide of making beats but he ujust made an error with the filters and compression nothing more
The track is very cool if it is made some mastering it would sound very cool
We don`t judge about someones abilities of mastering and stuff. We are validating the ideas. And trhis id exelent work
Redge keep it up men
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11-04-2005 13:40 |
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Rude
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snare is too $@#£-ing loud
looks like a gameboy-game
looks quite empty..
anyway, get this track right and I'll give ya a proper review
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11-04-2005 18:47 |
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Surya
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Bassline sound too synthesised. Please try a more natural sound...
Drop: snare is too loud and too much stereo spreaded. Put it a bit more in the center. And the kick... what kick?
Lacking bass and sub. Is there any?
Hats are crisp, but could use some lower frequencies too. Also, they've got an annoying pop.
Melodies aren't very intresting, making the track quite boring.
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12-04-2005 11:47 |
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REDGE
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I couldn't agree with u guys more.
My logic fucked up so I gotta start again, I think thats probably a good thing tho.
I wanna say thanks again for listenin to it, I know it's only experimental, next upload should be sweeter.
By the way, does anyone here use logic?, Ive only jus started on it, love the software, needs time tho!
Laterz
REDGE
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12-04-2005 16:31 |
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Yawn
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starts nice with a kinda experimental vibe to it. i like the idea you're going for but you haven't quite pulled it off this time. Do some more work on it, add fx, get your frequencies & levels sorted (lower the snare - its so overpowering), add more to it & take out that bit that comes in at 0.45 coz that really doesn't seem to fit imo. Then repost it & i reckon it will go down a lot better.
The track does have potential but it needs more work.
what version of logic are you using? I use it too & am learning new stuff about it all the time. It can be mad complicated at times though!
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12-04-2005 18:22 |
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REDGE
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Hey thanks to Surya and Crushfuck, nice one for takin the time to download a tune that really is no weher near completing.
Sadly I gotta start from scratch again (you guys prob thinking thats a very gud thing, heh)
Crushfuck - Im using Logic 7 Express, cant afford Logic pro. Its runnin on my Powerbook G4 (I mainly use it for graphics + Illustration but tunes are a sort of sub hobby im not very good at)
Yeah tho I agree its fuckin hektic, but the possibilities are endless even without a desk.
I think im guna stop lengthening out this thread but il keep checkin it, please still download. Im on a new project now, see it soon.
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13-04-2005 10:34 |
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Halph-Price
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you need a lfo to mess with the lead synths wavelength(PWM)
the kick is too deep, it shoudl usually be around 70-100 and it's deeper than the bassline i think... which isn't a dnb thing, more like dance. but even than it's still pretty deep.
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15-04-2005 18:54 |
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potatohead
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same as above....
the snares are way too loud. and the hi hats could come back a bit too.....
if you add sum sub it would be an okay tune. I like the fact that it sounds like an old videogame but it is too boring. take your idea and make it about 10x more interesting. That is all.
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15-04-2005 19:16 |
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Greyone
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drums aren't that good , allso the sounds look like gameboysounds , sorry but this isn't just what I was expecting.
keep trying
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18-04-2005 18:46 |
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