stickbubbly 
mad man
Registration Date: 16-09-2004
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Please check out my new track 'trip' and post your comments here!!!
Ive been workin on this track for a couple of weeks now.
im trying to get better at my mix downs.
any tips or comments would be appreciated.
cheers.
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08-04-2005 21:54 |
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CJWacko
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Registration Date: 08-04-2005
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Hi there!
Nice track!
Good use of synth-lines, very "organic" sound.
I especially like the intro, it makes me try to uhm, sync to the beat. Also, the Ghost in the Shell sample fits in perfectly with the "jack me in"/"tecky"/"Tracker-Style" sound of the song. Very nice indeed. The Cymbals/Hihats are very nice and rolling.
But now for the dislikes. The Rave-Brass (introduced 1:07) could use a little bit of "one octave down" bass in it. i'd say 70%normal/30%subbass. Furthermore, in the whole bass-range i'm missing something. Just a tad more Bass on the EQ would do the track good justice.
Overall, i think its a great track, good potential for a hit, and a good techy style overall. I just know for sure you have a good knowledge of your equipment!
Keep it up!
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08-04-2005 23:25 |
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Surora23
Agressive Melodic Disorder
Registration Date: 05-07-2004
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intro is kinda creepy...kind of carni ish...too clwnstepish without the clownstep breaks...
but for sound...everything is crisp...and clear...maybe the sub is a little week...but thats about it...
style istn my thing at all...but sound is pretty ncie and clean...since that whats what you were working on...
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09-04-2005 01:58 |
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camo
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Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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Hi!
intro synth is a bit not my thing, but that wobble stuff is good!
after drop:hmmmm, a bit too stressy for me! (but if i would listen it on a big party i would love it: PARTYSOUNDS!)
breaks are cool
I liked some of ya older tunes more than this, but its also cool!
thx for sharing ya music with us
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keepin it rollin`
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09-04-2005 15:46 |
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thefunke1
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Like being inside the brain of a mad scientist, creating his best experiment!! This tune is awsome!! I would say your best tune since Snake Charmer!! Intro is awsome!! I love the spacey, eerie feel to it, build it up and then slap me sideways as it drops in! Once in it's groov'in!! then the little step and 2:00, pure genius, just love it!!
This track is very detail orientated, everything has it's place, the track keeps you bouncing, and wanting more! The sounds, hits, and samples, are very nice, clean, with each having it's own place.
For sure a tune that needs to be listened too an a big system to fully appreciate, first listened on laptop, with crap speakers, then home computer, then studio, with the studio speakers this tune just jumps all over ya, very hard to stay stting down to listen to it!
Great work!!
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by thefunke1: 09-04-2005 17:04.
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09-04-2005 17:03 |
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tech1
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yer man thats a hot track. Intro nice keeps you interested, the drop has nice drum variations and i like that funky little bass. Technically i dont think the track needs work on, maybe a couple of effects added here and there would give a bit more athmospheric sound to the track. I sort of lost interest towards the end but that just my opinion.
It is still a well constructed tune and i would like to hear more of your tracks. Keep up the good work. 
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09-04-2005 17:47 |
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Nosrac
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There you go!! You nailed it on this one - drums are heavy and punchy and synths are wide. Your extra time spent mixing has really paid off. Great drop, catchy Pendulum type synth. The bongos are key. Nice filtering too. This is without a doubt your best track yet. The synthy tracks still aren't my cup of tea but this has tons of melodic variation and plenty of punchy drums to keep a dark and heavy fanatic like myself interested. Whatever you did different while mixing this track, go back and do the same to your older tracks, 'cause this one sounds really tight. Superb, right on pt boy!
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Tunes pictures and info: Myspace Page
MP3's: Acid Planet Page
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10-04-2005 14:09 |
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Nosrac
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10-04-2005 21:31 |
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wreakon
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again this track seems to lack any deep bassline??
mixdown is nice... everything sounds quite present and clear
some multiband compression and some deep bass will finish it off nicely 
3.5/5
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11-04-2005 00:49 |
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Surya
The Robot
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Cool intro!
Nice vocal too
Drop: typical playful yet not dull melodies, which should be quite good for getting people moving. Bassline needs a boost though. Hats are a bit too loud. Acually the whole high end is a bit too loud and sharp.
Cool track, but the sound needs some work, so keep practicing!
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- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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11-04-2005 14:12 |
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Stutterstep
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Registration Date: 27-01-2005
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wicked track, Luv it, True bloody arm pete. Nothing to say but awsome mix is perfect the only thing is more sub bass(try the overdrive in logic) I like it alot, i'm playin it this thursday, respect scumbag
stutter
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13-04-2005 05:00 |
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potatohead
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very electro...not a bad thing. i like this song. can i dj it sometime. maybe next tuesday.
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13-04-2005 18:39 |
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stickbubbly
mad man
Registration Date: 16-09-2004
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Originally posted by potatohead
very electro...not a bad thing. i like this song. can i dj it sometime. maybe next tuesday. |
sure.
let me know how it sounds.
stutterstep: you too, and let me know if people were diggen the track.
and thanx too everyone who took the time to review. big help.
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13-04-2005 21:17 |
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DISKYZE
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Registration Date: 16-10-2004
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YET ANOTHER BANGER...YOU GOT MAD STYLES EVEN THOUGH THIS ONE IS VERY PENDULUM STYLE,IM STILL DIGGIN IT ...DANCEFLOOR POWER FO SHURE! 
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19-04-2005 06:50 |
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equipped
tired
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Lovin this track, curious as to the source of the voice sample around the beggining of the track. Yourself maybe? 
Anyway's this is a tight track, lot's of attention to detail here. Cheers, thank's for the listen.++Stu Maggoo++
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