Paki - Indianka(demo version)

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Paki - Indianka(demo version)

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Paki

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Registration Date: 03-04-2005
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Please check out my new track 'Indianka(demo version)' and post your comments here!!!

This is my firs drum n bass track and it`s demo version made in Reason2.5. So don`t be so critically affected i`ve just started creating drum n bass

This track has been deleted. Reason: Paki has been banned from the site for creating a second identity and trying to cheat the voting system.

08-04-2005 18:54

Rude

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cool
for a first track that is Wink

not bad man, not bad at all,
need to get myself the reason really really soon

edit: man I forgot the review:
1 drums are ok
2 good bass
3 leave the conga's man, most people don't like 'm Wink

4 .. that's it I suppose

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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Rude: 08-04-2005 18:59.

08-04-2005 18:57

stickbubbly stickbubbly is a male

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i think your high hats may be a bit to loud, or maybe theres too many layered on top of each other.
didnt like the conga type noises that come in at 1 min
the song rolls nicely
bass is nice
gets a bit boring

exellent work for your first dnb track.

08-04-2005 22:35

Paki

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Rude thanks man this really encourages me Big Grin

Thanks for the tips about the congas man I will try something different. I am just working on something new hope you`ll get me some more usefull tips!!! I really apreciate your review

09-04-2005 03:32

Rude

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ohh wait, Paki, listen to your track again, you'll see that the sound is messed up, your track has been converted in 128 kbps, make sure to put it on at least 192 kbps Wink

that way, it'll sound much much better

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09-04-2005 13:01

marine289 marine289 is a male

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Originally posted by Rude
ohh wait, Paki, listen to your track again, you'll see that the sound is messed up, your track has been converted in 128 kbps, make sure to put it on at least 192 kbps Wink

that way, it'll sound much much better

you will get a better soundquality, but not a better sound. And besides, I can hardly notice the diffirence when I export two versions of my song, one 128 and another 192. Well, I can hear the diffirence, but most of the time I try not to go higher than 192 or 160, because that way people with a bad connection, like 56k or similar, can still get the track without having to wait 3 hours Red Face

Ok now about the song. Big Grin

intro isnt that interesting, may be add some effects.
Beat is cool, but it sounds low quality. But that could also be the samples you are using. Or the break, I dont know what you are using..
Im at 2 minutes now, and it's getting less interesting. All the same stuff. But your beats are cool. Really cool, for a first track (if you made them yourself that is..) But the beat needs more variation. It's all the same. You need to add more elements and keep it more interesting. Not only in drums, but in general I mean.
But it's not bad for a first track Bigup

Keep it up man.

09-04-2005 14:10

Paki

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Ok i`ve noticed that the track is dull and borring Cry

And you are all right about the dynamics of the track and the way it`s rolling. Yes everything is the same Cry

About the drums> the main drums are made by myself( the main drums that comes in the front with the hihats) and the congas are sample from the DnB section from Orchestra Bank from Reason2.5 Pleased

Anyway i`ll make some variations in the beat and the loops in my new track i`ve just started but i must admit that i`m very limited about the postmastering so my track would be mostly only demo versions.
What referes to the 128-192 dialog Ok i`ll make them 192kbs if you like that Bigup

Thanks too all of you Tongue

10-04-2005 13:46

Rude

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Originally posted by Paki
Ok i`ve noticed that the track is dull and borring Cry

And you are all right about the dynamics of the track and the way it`s rolling. Yes everything is the same Cry

man, don't let the other guys get you down Noo

lol my first track was a MAJOR BUMMER
this is quite a nice track dude, so keep learnin' and you'll kick ass in about a year or 2

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10-04-2005 15:52

Muad'Dib Muad'Dib is a male

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quote:

Originally posted by Paki
Ok i`ve noticed that the track is dull and borring Cry

And you are all right about the dynamics of the track and the way it`s rolling. Yes everything is the same Cry

About the drums> the main drums are made by myself( the main drums that comes in the front with the hihats) and the congas are sample from the DnB section from Orchestra Bank from Reason2.5 Pleased

Thanks too all of you Tongue

I am good at mastering, if you need any help feel free to contact. See your PM box! Wink

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11-04-2005 00:04

Surya

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Soundquality kinda sucks, dunno what you did wrong. Bad encoder maybe? Your highend shounds swooshy swooshy like in low-quality MP3s...

Drums seem quite nice.

You could have done more intresting things with the conga imo...

Ok, so you have your drums and the filtered bassline... and you cut the one or the other now and then... and... erm... that seems to be it? I think you'll be needing more elements to make a real track bro, this is TOO simple.

Nice basis, but add stuff!

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11-04-2005 13:12

tech1

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drums r good not much going on in the in tro drops good but not much bass mayb a 2nd bass in ther on the drop u got a good mix down on it still a good track u mapt the track out well u got a good sound cuming on ther b cool Bigup

11-04-2005 13:36

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